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medoss
medossLv42yr
2022-05-02 01:32

please keep writing it's really good i hope you do and thank you so much :) neat writing and good plot want more

Silver Prince

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4.5
141 Chs

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SomethingMalefic
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I liked part of it but its all ruined by plot holes so big and obvious it makes you want to go werewolf. an example: $$SPOILER$$ mc ship is attacked by pirates, all he had to do was fireball them and he would have won. he claims he doesn't have enough mana to do big attacks but then a few paragraphs later he starts going ham, creating magic cages, hundreds of water tentacles and controls a spear with telekinesis or something.

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Targaryens are Mid af. Big Bobby Robert Baratheon better. (keystrokes) (keystrokes) (keystrokes) (keystrokes) (keystrokes) (keystrokes)

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Raul_vaz
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no words just awe pls keep writing β€οΈπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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Kurama_is_tsundere
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14 CHAPTERS READ THINGS I REALLY LIKED The MC has been provided with a choice of job/professions from a rpg game or dnd he took mage which was my favourite pick especially for his world. The character development is good and i like how even though this is a ASOIAF world the MC is kind hearted where he can afford to be, make no mistake when his or his family is threatened he will retaliate. His choices really made me like him as a character. Also the original elements that the author introduced in this story were really well thought out. TLDR: i came, i read, i liked it. Try it out you might as well. Its one of the rare viserys SI (Dany's brother) fanfic where the MC is actually a good guy. Well as good of guy as can be in a ASOIAF world. Great work and thanks for writing. I hope you have a beautiful day πŸ˜πŸ‘

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mow
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This feels like a wish-fulfillment story due to how fast paced it is and the author not bothering explaining the details of how things came to be at times, the author complete skips that completely for the most part. The other thing that was eh but it not really THAT bad was the grammar, its perfectly readable but its not enough for my standards, no matter how good the plot and world building of a novel is, if the grammar is bad its basically just a story im going to be speed running just like this one. I guess it also helps that the author doesn't really even want to explain the process to things since they seem to just happen. Anyway overall the story is simply mid to me, not bad nor good so if you want something to kill the time with then its good enough, or if your standards make you not mind the grammar or the lack of actual world building/explanation to things then this is a good novel for you. Doesn't help that in the first few chapters the MC makes some questionable decisions at best.

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Twasasetup
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This is neither slice of life nor comedy, it's just another below average GOT Fic. First 40 chapters are good but afterwards it becomes confusing. I don't know how old the mc is or how old his sister is. Author keeps forgetting all sorts of characters for 30-40 chapters. Author completely forgot about Jon Snow after mc brought him to his kingdom, he forgot to use the dragons in many fights and forgot his fiance, sister, and niece for many chapters.

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Pietro_kenway
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Muito bem escrito, tem uma boa histΓ³ria de fundo Γ© incrΓ­vel, muito melhor do que a maioria das histΓ³rias desse site, Sinceramente nem percebi o tempo voando.

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Eri_lou11
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Amazing just amazing 10000/10 would recommend.

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Kudos for providing us a well written and high quality fanfic. The plot isn't that great as there are tons of plot holes. MC isn't what you will expect as he is still ignorant and isn't adaptable enough to the character and era he is currently at. other than those everything is great. I highly recommend some actions as him being a mage and coming from an our era and knows the TV story he ain't doing enough.

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