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mowLv42yr
2022-06-27 17:03

This feels like a wish-fulfillment story due to how fast paced it is and the author not bothering explaining the details of how things came to be at times, the author complete skips that completely for the most part. The other thing that was eh but it not really THAT bad was the grammar, its perfectly readable but its not enough for my standards, no matter how good the plot and world building of a novel is, if the grammar is bad its basically just a story im going to be speed running just like this one. I guess it also helps that the author doesn't really even want to explain the process to things since they seem to just happen. Anyway overall the story is simply mid to me, not bad nor good so if you want something to kill the time with then its good enough, or if your standards make you not mind the grammar or the lack of actual world building/explanation to things then this is a good novel for you. Doesn't help that in the first few chapters the MC makes some questionable decisions at best.

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