C'est un bon début, j'aime bien la personnalité de MC, magie de flamme simple mais avec des possibilités infinis. J'espère juste que MC ne sera pas surpuissant dès le début de la trame principale. Je recommande cette fanfiction merci !

✨💫Review after 11 chapters 💫✨ Writing Quality (⭐3,5): The Writing Quality is good but sometimes gets bad so you should also be careful when you always make so many spaces between words like: "Hello my name is Ghost and I’m doing a review . And the Author makes too many spaces . " Y'know what I mean? Updating Stability (⭐5,0): It’s been having regular updates so far and there isn’t really anything to complain about other than wishing you to keep up the good work you’ve made contentiously!! (unless you’re sick) Story Development (⭐5,0): I have been pretty satisfied in the direction the story is currently going to and I can only advise you to make the possible love interest appear later and focus more on building the foundations for your story, instead of pushing some forced relationship. So currently, just focus on the mc and you’ll be fine as long as you don’t forget to make the side-characters enjoyable too (pls don’t add annoying ones, nobody likes them lol). Character Design (⭐5,0): I loved how you made the characters intelligent without being brainless idiots so just continue how you’ve been doing it 👍 World Background (⭐3,5): There honestly could have been more interaction with other characters so you made too many time skips for convenience to skip his training part at the start but could have shown us better how Asta, Yuno and his father interact with him so you should be careful with making too many time skips or you might end your story without even noticing that it ended too fast. (But I do understand that you want to progress in your story so this is just a reminder not to rush too much and rather go the steady path, would be cool if he somehow learned ki without Yamis help though)<—I don’t know where he will join but it’s always cool to see an mc learning something without someone else help Summary (⭐4,2): BUT this is just my opinion and part-advice so write your story how you see fit but make sure to slow down the time skips once he gets accepted in those magic knight groups. Note: Would be cool if this review of mine was pinned since I never achieved that no matter what I wrote lol😅 Btw if I said anything wrong then correct me please since I don’t want to make my review affect new readers of your story in a bad way and since I usually don’t make reviews very often I still hope it was helpful so thanks for making this story, I’m looking forward to further chapters!! 😁 (Max=⭐5,0 Min=⭐1,0) Total: ⭐4,2

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I already said my opinion about my rating in the comments of each chapter, but I'll repeat it here. This fanfic is stupid, the MC is nerfed by 90%, he has a fast initial growth but receives a nerf and barely increases his strength in the following years. MC follows canon religiously and I don't see him changing anything. It's Black Clover with a secondary character added, I was excited to find a black clover fic but each chapter was so stupid that I couldn't help but feel angry. Disappointed is my current emotion, I don't want something perfect but this story is rubbish. I don't want to reply to my comment if you're against my opinion, I say it's rubbish because I really think so, and I don't want to argue with some random offended fan Google translate

i have alot of issues with this its fastpaced and slowpaced at the same time u skip years yet the mc Barely improves ur excuse is his age even though this is a fictional world hes of royal blood too and has hella advantages yet hes still weak and has less mana than yuno even though he trains more and uses different means honestly might drop this

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writing quality: 3 star, there are mistakes here and there and the writing style are clearly that of a newbie at writing so it's 3 star, I've seen worse story development: 1 star I would originally put 3 star at first but when the mc joins the black bulls I already know it will be just like the other ff, you know there are a few black clover ff out there and almost everyone joins black bulls so almost every single one became the typical "woot-why did he choose black bull?! then became strong and the other team/knights be like "hes just a commoner blah blah" then the captain of the team would scold them Yeah character design: 3 star not bland enough to be 1-2 star and not unique enough to be 4-5 star(unique in a sense that he's different from the other mc in other black clover fic they are mostly the same). updating stability: 4 stars it has a daily update of 1 chap a day, (5 stars are for the novel with 2+update daily, still depends on how long a single chapter is) world background: 2 star it's okay alot of time skips here and there, it could be better if the author explain the world a bit more and how characters interact in the background not just "wow that guy stronk"etc. overall 2.6 stars, I would give it higher if the author is a bit more creative and join the other knight guard/team and make a different plot instead of following the og story.

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I liked the story at first but it was kinda ruined for me when MC obtained the Sharingan eyes and started copying every magic out there. Even in Naruto verse Uchiha clan couldn't copy Kekke Genkai, they were only able to copy moves from one of the five base elements. And there is too much original concept. I mean it's understandable at first since you need to build your character but after the canon began it just became annoying it felt like MC has no relevance to the main story. He did change a few things but nothing major. Author has a great sense of creativity and his writing has improved a lot since the beginning.