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The plot is good but in the chapters the author had inconsistencies and the flow was off there were some thing that were Ununnecessary but those parts could bring more prospect’s to your novel if u word it right and have the right flow What I do is think like I’m a reader I want to read something that keeps me hooked and flows easily while also keeping all the complicated and unique parts It’ s still a good read but just make it flow and you’ll see the collections and views roll in