Review Detail of AnotherAtlas in Godzilla In Konoha
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2.5 personal rating. Always hate the Chinese vibes in fanfictions about worlds that have nothing to do with chinese cultivation novels. You don't cultivate or 'refine chakras' in naruro. Sometimes the tl gets names wrong and repeats itself. I appreciate the notes explaining idioms, I guess. The mc is sort of like an empty sheet of paper. Random wish for peace is all he has, which is not that interesting.
Godzilla In Konoha
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LulzLowKey:I read the synopsis and could easily tell it would be stupid. like, Godzilla does have a tail so it can't be a no-tail beast or whatever
why read something you dont like in the first place? i didnt even need to read the entire first chapter to find "refining" chakra or the usage of "expert" for a strenght level. so no whining here.
Varun_Mohunah:Stooooopid. Read then give a review.
That's the thing. How do you know you don't like it? You must have read a part of it or something. Then you say you don't like it and why. That is a contructive review. Some authors don't have english as 1st language. So this may help them improve. So yeah. Stoooopid, read then give a review.
Eins_Mensch:why read something you dont like in the first place? i didnt even need to read the entire first chapter to find "refining" chakra or the usage of "expert" for a strenght level. so no whining here.
Yes i read a part and decided i dont like it, not gonna read more or the whole story when i dont like even the first five chps and i very much have the right to make that known, otherwise why would there be a review function for stories? As for getting better in english, there is school that helps with that, youre only writing down what you know from the language youre writing in in the form of the story, doesnt when copying work from others or just google translate it. And i personally think this is a copy from a mtl from some rdm site, happens fairly often and explains the bad english aswell as the strange wording including the writing style, the description is quiet a common example for that and i saw it similar in over a hundred stories on mtl translation sites in both good and bad translation + editing. Btw its "Stupid" not "Stopid", not sure why youre saying "Stopid" on purpose but it sounds ridiculous.
Varun_Mohunah:That's the thing. How do you know you don't like it? You must have read a part of it or something. Then you say you don't like it and why. That is a contructive review. Some authors don't have english as 1st language. So this may help them improve. So yeah. Stoooopid, read then give a review.
Eins_Mensch:Yes i read a part and decided i dont like it, not gonna read more or the whole story when i dont like even the first five chps and i very much have the right to make that known, otherwise why would there be a review function for stories? As for getting better in english, there is school that helps with that, youre only writing down what you know from the language youre writing in in the form of the story, doesnt when copying work from others or just google translate it. And i personally think this is a copy from a mtl from some rdm site, happens fairly often and explains the bad english aswell as the strange wording including the writing style, the description is quiet a common example for that and i saw it similar in over a hundred stories on mtl translation sites in both good and bad translation + editing. Btw its "Stupid" not "Stopid", not sure why youre saying "Stopid" on purpose but it sounds ridiculous.
LulzLowKey:I read the synopsis and could easily tell it would be stupid. like, Godzilla does have a tail so it can't be a no-tail beast or whatever