So is he randomly teleport to nilfheim or is it his designation because of that is his "home"?...If Nazarick are teleported from Helheim to Midgard then it is reasonable

The timeline is fvk up...The character personality is fvk up...the stories is fvk up...well sometime I was wondering does the author even watch the anime? is he even knew the plot? there is 700 ch but bruh bad start...

alright lads...wait for the next update now

Bad, very bad...I know this stories is not about romance but this is just leaving a bad taste on my mouth...he's cold and doesn't give a fvk to woman, and when finally he choose a woman he jusy leave her in small island almost got raped by so thugs...it's really bad,

The rway mc giving relationship with the girl is very bad...He is not a girlcareman, he's cold...Vernon and Hina leave him and found their own lover because he giving they cold shoulder....And little shit choosing Baby 5 instead who he also leave alone in small Island almost got raped and then playing clitche hero rescue...fvk the romance was so bad that so shine outweight the stories making it taste bad in mouth

his love interest also mess up...first itwas vernon but he just give her cold shoulder so she leave him, then Hina who repeadly remind him but still he doesn't care about her at all and also leave him...and the stupid thing is he choosing Baby 5 who he always leave alone and only come once in a while...This really dissapointing nd heartbreaking for people reading this BS...

Well, he just kinda toyed with whole ninja world now...I mean this fanfic has become slice of life the moment he fvk the goddess of ninja

Yeah, your progressing in his romance life is too sudden dude, I mean from what I've seen the relationship between Thena and MC is not romantic yet before the chapter 50...It's just so sudden for me to accept Thena suddenly said something straightforward...is it her character tho? Mc I understand it's because his time spend with helen and 1000 years timeskip but for Athena her sudden change to character must be because of the request of comment so I think that's what make you stir their relationship...And It's not like I don't read your books, In fact I've been finish reading it and just kinda wait to stack the chapter a bit to read again...

you ignoring my point here, you were making a character you know who at the start is a bit stiff to the like people and suddenly without any proper thing you giving him a romance, your character is ok bit but the story is to sudden...have you seen clearly at the moment he doesn't know what romance is or he think of it as it is just 20 chapter spending time with others...and with 1000 years timeskip, it is inevitable that the feeling will be off a bit, you need progress man...the romance is so sudden thay making me thinking "do these woman really think he still love her just because he kiss her 1000 years ago?" you self giving the vibe of boredom to the character yet you didn't think of it so of course I would point it out and oh, don't be a jezz...I do critizing your books but not to the think outside of it, grown up...mark

he is in this few chapters has been really...unrestrained. Making him like sort of mental clown, he need to tone down a lil bit

ah yes, and here Am I...trying to continue to read it again like last time, Seriously? I don't hate romance but I hate forceful one...it's so sudden for him to have romance with Thena giving the time they spend together and how he deals with her...yeah much BS in romance life, very sudden very forceful

Well, It's rather unfortunate because this fanfic are more appealing for me rather than the new one but I do appreciate your effort to make it done...

this mc...He's a self centered guy, he want people to loves him...well he is indeed a naive not in kind way, but in his own persona...maybe because of the author bias? I don't know what to say right now the mc is very unlikeable for my liking...better to add tags villains rather than he play "hero" or "anti-hero" because he is more giving the vibes of negatives mc

This guy just straight a villain, No remorse, no regret, no hesitated...he do things according to his wish, his will, and his own rule...This guy just a Devil in human shell...I hope you could add Villain tags in here

I hope whatever DF he may get that won't make him looks silly with the abilities of him...Because he does have Swordman Innate Talent, If the DF doesn't matchup or simply make him like a clown in battle it's just simply droping the enthusiasm...I have seen many author just simply limiting their own MC in the case to not be overpower yet what I've seen just make their MC more silly than ever it was...the point is, whatever DF later, I hope it would be could and not just given any random weak silly looking ability DF just for the case to limiting the character to not overpowering it.

Beside the Update and World background all of this is rubbish...I don't know to say, To much of patriotic and compatriot feelings maybe? that alone destroying the plot of story, from character to story it's very poor. I have no Idea why this KIND of fanfiction is so compassionate about proud and patriotic with their own ethnic but It's really destroyed the plot

Life is...unfair If I would say but Hela got it rough, and the ending of her life in this chapter just biting the sorrow more...what do you expect for someone who had live a life war-machine like...she just want's to feel something else, even if it's wrong. the way MC treat here is...very poor if I say, he's not the thing to be look at and that the minus of him. This just my bitterness and sadness about how Hela end

the guy is sick...damnit I think I got some PTSD reading this sicko fanfic

way to forced man...I think the others are right, this kind of move you make gain more negative from others rather than positive one...You just suddenly make it weird and not gonna lie it's not a good one, the Image of a character is the background of the books, you just play with the mc personality and this happen...the story become stray from the path and the execution also poor, I read from this last few chapter making it you got forced to "reactivated" the so-called gamer mind and that's not even "a few days" later like you mentioned in previous comment...the enthusiasm of people become less because of that...I hope a goodluck

ah very cliche one...there is no record mikoto "often" went to ramen ichiraku but the author just made this things up...and the reason is very simple, for opportunity the mc to meet a "heroine"...what a simple predictable kind of books is this...there's nothing to expect or out of ordinary in this...very poor execution