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kadri_al
kadri_alLv12yr
2022-02-26 00:32

First, the world of mc is not earth, the world of mc is a world where 90% of the territory belongs to dangerous monsters. when her arm was attacked by a foreign creature or object causing pain and temporary loss of consciousness instead of consulting a specialist or doctor, she chose to go back to her private apartment to have her checked in person. hey dude, you're not a martial arts expert who has the expertise to identify monsters or other suspicious objects, you're just an ordinary human. Your logic is problematic, it doesn't match the environment you live in. the plot is too forced, if mc's logic is that stupid, even without the disease he suffers, he will still have a short life.

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13th_Night
13th_NightLv13

i am confused by your review

Vastoking
VastokingLv5

me too

13th_Night:i am confused by your review
shv
shvLv1

according to what he said.. a girl probably got infected.. instead of taking her to the hospital to get her checked he took it upon himself to do the check up.. when he has no expertise at all in it

13th_Night:i am confused by your review
Nyxio
NyxioLv4

Wow how did you decipher this? xD It makes sense now.

shv:according to what he said.. a girl probably got infected.. instead of taking her to the hospital to get her checked he took it upon himself to do the check up.. when he has no expertise at all in it
IFuckedJadeBeauty
IFuckedJadeBeautyLv13

shv:according to what he said.. a girl probably got infected.. instead of taking her to the hospital to get her checked he took it upon himself to do the check up.. when he has no expertise at all in it
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Atomsphere
AtomsphereLv1

Ptui! This author's style is all about selling his integrity for immediate cheap thrills. Everything is retconned as soon as possible, even his body shape. It even happens from paragraph to paragraph; he'll clearly use a technique to boost his damage and then the next sentence he'll say "he didn't even use a technique!" Tangentially related, the name of the novel is Permanent Martial Arts, but the MC avoids martial arts like the plague. It's all just punching as hard as he can with no respect for martial arts. Only with the most dismissive and cynical eye could someone say that martial arts is only about punching hard. There's even some exposition about how martial arts is more than just hitting hard and then he continues to just do that. World background is pretty cool, it'd probably be like a 4 if it wasn't inconsistent. Superman exists as a fictional character. There are westerners and Asians despite it not being Earth. Technology is all over the place; it's just advanced until it's not for impact reasons. Character design is okay. I like the romance because it's so muted and feels kind of real. It's very reasonable for young people to not even know why they like each other. Specifically, it's nice to see other people have relationships. I actually don't mind harem novels, but my problem with them is usually only the MC can get all the best girls. It's great to see an MC with friends and that those friends have their own lives. Translation quality isn't bad. It's very readable with only some minor issues. Despite all of it's problems, I'm still reading >.>

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