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King_Of_Beast
King_Of_BeastLv22yrKing_Of_Beast

A review after forty chapters. Well, Sabin did disappoint me with the previous title but thankfully he changed it since Dual Cultivation is not a core part of this story. As he said, there are some inconsistency in writing but for story development, character design, and world background, everything seems find for forty chapters. The world isn't fleshed out but the place where we visit are fleshed out and it slowly starts with the background of the characters. I love when characters are explored with emotions in the story even though some main characters were introduced without any background. They slowly get time to express their own feelings and emotions. Although Updates got little unstable during the middle, it was due to his health. So, I can't cut star for that. Well, story development is still on the early stage, but we are getting pretty darn cool progress with his village and the characters. Well, this is a review from me. I hope you will give free chapters a try and then decide whether to continue or not. As for why I didn't mention writing quality, well, as a early reader from his first book, his writing skill still sucks but enough to make a story understandable.

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I Lied To Become Village Chief

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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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Thank you for your fleshed out review. This review deserves to get pinned.

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aigotchaLv3aigotcha

What was the old title?