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Hahadavis
HahadavisLv52yr
2022-01-12 15:32

I can't believe something like this has this many views, the longer I read the ff the more angry I got (WHY) because you basically changed the whole personality of the Mc(which was fine btw) but made the plot THE EXACT SAME AS THE ORIGINAL nothing has changed except some of his powers(he's more op) and even with more power you're still making him follow the same plot as the original. Look i'm not asking for you to change the entire plot but at least have something be different, this is basically COPY-PASTE!

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HappyVainGlory
HappyVainGloryAuthor

DevilNutTrigger
DevilNutTriggerLv14

I dont know if I can take your review seriously considering your pfp is a troll face…

Percy_Perch
Percy_PerchLv3

I have no idea what to believe but the troll face is making me not believe u

HiatusAuthorEuclid
HiatusAuthorEuclidLv4

I just can't take you seriously man, I saw in your profile that you continued reading after you gave a 1 star.

MirukuTaku
MirukuTakuLv4

this dude probably just goes around trolling other ffs lol

Sleeping_Leviathan
Sleeping_LeviathanLv3

Did... Did you just complain about the MC’s character changing in a self insert fic?

ONEPUNCH
ONEPUNCHLv4

He is complaining about the plot. He's fine with the change in personality (and actually supports it)

Sleeping_Leviathan:Did... Did you just complain about the MC’s character changing in a self insert fic?
IAmNumber5
IAmNumber5Lv4

Well in his case he didn't say that he was dropping

HiatusAuthorEuclid:I just can't take you seriously man, I saw in your profile that you continued reading after you gave a 1 star.
Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

I kind of agree with your opinion... but giving one star is too excessive.... Mc's personality in my opinion is very irregular like sometimes he wants to save people and sometimes he is selfish... also I think the story is a bit like the original novel ... sigh

Amatsuka_Yukino
Amatsuka_YukinoLv14

Some people find it unsettling not having things go out of their control which is why I think he stick close to the plot?

HappyVainGlory
HappyVainGloryAuthor

Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.

Amatsuka_Yukino:Some people find it unsettling not having things go out of their control which is why I think he stick close to the plot?
Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5

Do you have a schedule for the update author-san ?

HappyVainGlory:Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.
HappyVainGlory
HappyVainGloryAuthor

I did, but law school workload was more than expected. Aiming for weekly on Friday/Saturday right now and hopefully biweekly when I get things sorted

Afonso_Aaron:Do you have a schedule for the update author-san ?
Amatsuka_Yukino
Amatsuka_YukinoLv14

Was just reading the reviews before reading so.. 😅

HappyVainGlory:Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.
HappyVainGlory
HappyVainGloryAuthor

Oh, nono. Didn't mean to address you in specific. I just thought that they automatically pop up first so it would have been explained. I guess they don't thought? 🤔

Amatsuka_Yukino:Was just reading the reviews before reading so.. 😅
Shnh_Kusuma_3576
Shnh_Kusuma_3576Lv2

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Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv13

It’s good He is following the plot a bit Po mcuh for now but it’sworth reading

DevilNutTrigger:I dont know if I can take your review seriously considering your pfp is a troll face…
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Understand
UnderstandLv13

This is supposed to be a self insert fan fiction tho... so I don't get your argument...

Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

are the harem members same as in the novel?

HappyVainGlory:Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.
sholo_bolo
sholo_boloLv4

I can attest that what he's saying is true. the entire plot stays the same and sometimes the author uses such forced plots to make that happen that it's annoying to read on at certain parts. the MC is also overly generous just like seol so I don't really see the point of this book, aren't fanfics supposed to be different that the original?

DevilNutTrigger:I dont know if I can take your review seriously considering your pfp is a troll face…
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