I can't believe something like this has this many views, the longer I read the ff the more angry I got (WHY) because you basically changed the whole personality of the Mc(which was fine btw) but made the plot THE EXACT SAME AS THE ORIGINAL nothing has changed except some of his powers(he's more op) and even with more power you're still making him follow the same plot as the original. Look i'm not asking for you to change the entire plot but at least have something be different, this is basically COPY-PASTE!
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LIKEI can attest that what he's saying is true. the entire plot stays the same and sometimes the author uses such forced plots to make that happen that it's annoying to read on at certain parts. the MC is also overly generous just like seol so I don't really see the point of this book, aren't fanfics supposed to be different that the original?
DevilNutTrigger:I dont know if I can take your review seriously considering your pfp is a troll face…image