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Hadi_Djouini
Hadi_DjouiniLv42yr
2022-05-06 07:16

Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel. Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving on Whats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh

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Mister_Writer
Mister_WriterAuthor

They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.

MrRagHand
MrRagHandLv15

Did… did you even the novel?

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Hadi_Djouini
Hadi_DjouiniLv4

I've read to chapter 20. Then I skipped to ch 40 and read a few. Maybe it's just not my cup of tea, but some of the points in my review still stand tho

MrRagHand:Did… did you even the novel?
OLB
OLBLv3

apenas assuma que sua história é uma merda, amigo. não invente desculpas.

Mister_Writer:They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.
CCP_ARE_RETARDED
CCP_ARE_RETARDEDLv2

TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC TRASH ,WEAK, DUMB MC

Mister_Writer:They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.
CCP_ARE_RETARDED
CCP_ARE_RETARDEDLv2

Mister_Writer:They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.
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Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here. This novel is about transmigrated MC into a magical world where he becomes Master Academy in Heaven Academy.. Heaven Academy used to be top Academy in the world.. Unfortunately, this academy had long forgotten by the world, and now, many people only know it as a myth, which results in many people doubting the existence and the truth of the myth about this academy.. This Academy have a mystery foundation where everyone who become Master, teacher, or student of the academy will awaken the "system" to assist them in cultivation to grow stronger.. That is why this novel has a title of My System Academy. MC is not the only person who has a system in this novel.. This novel has a tag "pretend to be weak" but MC not pretend to be weak, MC is really weak at the start due to he not awaken his talent, magic power, magic root, magic aptitude, magic affinity and magic spell.. MC is given temporary power to pretend his mystery strength to intimidate other people.. MC will eventually become stronger fast with the system help.. This novel has the potential to become one of the hidden gems in webnovel, but unfortunately, there are many plot holes in this novel.. Lack of detail, vague explanation, skipping scene, contradict fact, and so on.. The system said that it prioritise the individual personality, but the system sets a minimum bar soooo high standard in magic attitude and magic root.. For example, the company you interesting on are hiring people, and they said they are looking to a good personality people and not highly educated academic results, BUT they also put a minimum condition to apply for their company into "above 3.75 CGPA" only.. We can only hope the author grows and gain more experience while writing this novel and make the best novel he ever created later on.. Unfortunately, as you can see, this novel has been abandoned.. Even though you read until the latest chapters, you will just waste your time.. It is obvious that the author has given up on writing.. Well, not everyone has a talent in writing a novel.. The author got a good and creative idea, but he can't make a better story due to lack of experience and expertise guide..

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