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OsirysOsprey04
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2022-04-15 15:37

Nice novel The concept the author created are very good and are well implemented in the world background. There are some errors in the plot and the characters lack ‘ true emotion’, Another thing regard the MC, he’s not an idiot, but not that smart either. Try to give him a faster mental growth, the mask should heavily influence his other self. Moreover, the stronger the smart. He doesn’t need to be a genius, but if he can multitask and fight so well then he should not need the system reminder or fall in his own forgetfulness. All in all, it’s a very nice Novell that, if correctly improved, can be brought to a higher level. In my opinion the author have hope of writing top novel in the future, so keep it up.

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Captain_Spoiler
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Honest reviews are here. This novel is about transmigrated MC into a magical world where he becomes Master Academy in Heaven Academy.. Heaven Academy used to be top Academy in the world.. Unfortunately, this academy had long forgotten by the world, and now, many people only know it as a myth, which results in many people doubting the existence and the truth of the myth about this academy.. This Academy have a mystery foundation where everyone who become Master, teacher, or student of the academy will awaken the "system" to assist them in cultivation to grow stronger.. That is why this novel has a title of My System Academy. MC is not the only person who has a system in this novel.. This novel has a tag "pretend to be weak" but MC not pretend to be weak, MC is really weak at the start due to he not awaken his talent, magic power, magic root, magic aptitude, magic affinity and magic spell.. MC is given temporary power to pretend his mystery strength to intimidate other people.. MC will eventually become stronger fast with the system help.. This novel has the potential to become one of the hidden gems in webnovel, but unfortunately, there are many plot holes in this novel.. Lack of detail, vague explanation, skipping scene, contradict fact, and so on.. The system said that it prioritise the individual personality, but the system sets a minimum bar soooo high standard in magic attitude and magic root.. For example, the company you interesting on are hiring people, and they said they are looking to a good personality people and not highly educated academic results, BUT they also put a minimum condition to apply for their company into "above 3.75 CGPA" only.. We can only hope the author grows and gain more experience while writing this novel and make the best novel he ever created later on.. Unfortunately, as you can see, this novel has been abandoned.. Even though you read until the latest chapters, you will just waste your time.. It is obvious that the author has given up on writing.. Well, not everyone has a talent in writing a novel.. The author got a good and creative idea, but he can't make a better story due to lack of experience and expertise guide..

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