i don't do reviews often, but figured i should because somehow this novel has high ratings. i'll start off with the writing quality, it's poor. the english isn't good, the writing feels robotic and detached, it's not immersive at all and is sometimes confusing due to the poor english. idk about the stability of updates so i just put that at 5 stars. story development is weird, doesn't make sense, there's tons of plot holes and it feels like the author completely forgets everything he wrote about 3 chapters ago, it's like the men in black wiped his memory every 3 chapters. as for character design, it's really awkward, pretty stupid especially the "protagonists" who aren't really protagonists, they're just normal stupid villains called the protagonist while the mc is a slave to the system and an idiot, other characters also feel detached and not real. as for the world background, i haven't read enough to really have a good opinion about it, but so far it's nothing special, and is not that great.
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LIKEi read 30 but i wanted to drop it at 5, i held on hoping it'd get better but it didn't. there's a reason i'm not the only one leaving a review like this, and even if it does get better later on, i highly doubt it's better by much
walnut:this just shows that u haven’t read to the later chapters
the protagonists are protagonists. If youve ever read a wn, the mc is almost always more despicable then the "villains". Mc steal villains wife cause he lucky, Villain get mad and try to kill mc for stealing wife, Mc obliterate villains entire bloodline. Mc is villain here, yet he is still called righteous. This novel just points out the irony
divinrth:i read 30 but i wanted to drop it at 5, i held on hoping it'd get better but it didn't. there's a reason i'm not the only one leaving a review like this, and even if it does get better later on, i highly doubt it's better by much