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okboka15431yrReplied to Saint_LewddetailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat- okboka15431yrPosted
bruh, the braindead readers keep flaming this book. it's pretty good, much better that the trashy self-insert harem/xianxia HP fan-fics. writing quality begins to mimick JK Rowling halfway though, story development and world building need no explanation. I do wish that the author did not mention anything about transmitigation, as it has nothing to do with the story and is abandoned very early on. update stability is very good, and character design is moderate-good. overall, good job author! Don't let the self-insert/harem/op protag fans keep you down!
detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat - okboka15431yrReplied to YuushaExa
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Understandable, have a nice day.
The End. - okboka15431yrCommented
ayo why this chapter cost 2 fp?
"They… fucking nuked everyone?" - okboka15431yrCommented
bro whiteking truly a king... got two, now potentially 3...
"Wait, just fucking wait…" Charlotte then pointed her palm towards Alice; her other hand, grasping her head as her breathing became unusually heavy, "Don't tell me… please don't fucking tell me it's Whiteking's?" - okboka15431yrCommented
hmmm.....
1000 powestones = 5 extra chapters - okboka15431yrReplied to Vitamorte
the morals of man, you procreate young and as a normal person, or grow old and become the pedo...
For one Telan who had lived for so many trillions of years one would have assumed that there were very few unknowns left for him, after all, he lived 33 lives and by now he was so many trillions of years old that he stopped counting. - okboka15431yrCommented
hey.. wait a minute...
"I'm Meng Hao." - okboka15431yrCommented
do-do do-do do, do-do doooo
The plot was changing... and I'm pretty sure there's a killer among us. - okboka15431yrCommented
im gonna take a guess and say that something sexual will happen...
I open my eyes involuntarily and look at my food. It looks delicious, then I look at Mark, surprisingly enough his eyes were also open, But they weren't on me. They were on Lecia. - okboka15431yrReplied to Void99
at least with Joe, you can use the "Joe Mama" card a lot.
I wanted a name that made my enemies tremble in fear, something like 'Razorface' or something. - okboka15431yrPosted
overall, the story is pretty good. But the grammer... the sentence structures.... I could immediately tell it was translated kind of poorly. Very long sentences, clauses and phrases mashed together in an abominable manner... Please improve the sentence structure so it is not a first draft, but a good, solid story.
- okboka15431yrReplied to Ybaby
lesgooooo!
Other cases was when a daughter of high ranking officer accidentaly touched his chest. Long Ao Zhen was furious and punched the girl till she nearly die from the punch. - okboka15431yrCommented
ok oi, no spoiling the shotas! save some for us!
Perverts who spoil shotas for their own nefarious purposes. - okboka15431yrCommented
b r u h
This book has been deleted. - okboka15431yrReplied to Izumi_Hori_san
ayo what if you do it twice, once in this world and once in another?
This paragraph has been deleted. - okboka15431yrReplied to PengFei
I will admit, the first hundred or so chapters are kinda boring, and you have to slug through it. It then becomes beautiful. I read it on Amazon Kindle, i kept the all but the first book. honestly, you could probably skip the first hundred, and work your way from there, though there are some important background stuff there. think of the first hundred chapters, or first novel, as the prolouge, where you are introduced to every important art and character, and then the adventure begins when he goes to violet fate.