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StoneBowl
StoneBowlLv143yr
2022-01-11 01:27

Interesting fanfic, I’ve enjoyed reading it so far. The grammar is solid and the author seems to be updating this regularly. It feels like the fanfic is still in the setting building phase, and doesn’t yet have any main quest/goal other than getting allies. But there isn’t even 20 chapters yet, so there is still plenty of room to build the plot. I’ve got high hopes, and I’m looking forward to seeing where the author will go with this.

Dhampir in DxD

ArifuretaForever
4.1
52 Chs

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8ightbit
8ightbitLv4

I went into this fanfic expecting something good from what i read in the synopsis.. I was wrong.. The story is dull and too serious for an ecchi/comedy world.. the character interactions are robotic at times and it feels like there is no life within the characters; like they're puppets, just going through the motions, and not interesting at all.. The so-called comedy within the story is so dry, you'd think you are a parched man dying from dehydration in the middle of a desert, so the humour is basically non-existent.. I mean, there is, it is just that, it isn't funny at all.. Idk, I gave this a chance, but it didn't meet my tastes so I guess I'll pass future chapters.. anyway this was my opinion/review on this ff.. WQ - 2/5 SOU - 5/5 SD - 1/5 CD - 1/5 WB - 3/5 Overall - 2.4/5

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LukeMorningStar
LukeMorningStarLv3

With all due respect this is very pathetic, the MC is not dominated at all as has been said, the MC is a hypocrite who despite saying he "doesn't hate" Rias is belittling her and also saying that she is a bad leader since he no, it's also no big deal to be just a generic mama's boy without an ounce of authenticity. There's also no feeling in the characters, it's like they're just a bunch of alienated people walking around with no desires or goals.

3yr
SkyEmperor101
SkyEmperor101Lv1

Grammar is solid. Plot is good. Reading the authors note hoping for a manipulative mc, didn’t get that at all, I have not seen one person being manipulated so far, another point in authors note is that he would be ‘overpowered’ in hitting most people with one hit before down. Complete lies not one person has been beat down. He is also, you could say ‘tamed’ by her, even I. The story it says. ‘She has us whipped’. Not the good story I was hoping for, just not for me.

3yr
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

at first very bad in character development, then it gets worse when the woman doesn't want to be a vampire, but instead becomes a fallen angel who is transformed by azasel, which means all women are slaves of azasel, she can use mc and now mc has no equal advantage once, uh, which I think is a woman's betrayal, meh is very stupid.

2yr
AshGod7
AshGod7Lv4

The novel is nice and I like it currently although sometimes I find the mc a little irrtiating but that's just my views and it is not necessary for you to share shame views as me and I hope you continue it in future and do not drop it halfway .

3yr
DaoistZlQoLq
DaoistZlQoLqLv3

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Genzk
GenzkLv4

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Luffyloo
LuffylooLv13

Haven't read this yet but immensely enjoyed your hxh fanfics. BEFORE I read I must know if he is going to be put in a peerage, which I genuinely hope he does NOT. Cheer!

3yr
Enorracs_Nemoris
Enorracs_NemorisLv1

me gusto bastante me preguntaba porque no había visto este fanfic antes pero luego me di cuenta de que recién lo subió hace 6 días esto no tiene nada que ver con la reseña mi pregunta es saben cómo buscar fanfics de dxd no encuentro pocos de los buenos

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