Review Detail of alex02373 in Pokemon: Blood Bonds

I would personally give it 4.8. This story never bored me personally and always made me look forward to the next chapter, which is almost never the case with other stories. Story Development: No problem and it flowed very well. Personally, I would be happy if there were more surprises in the story and the Mc had less plot armo. But overall it is very good and objectively very good. Fight: I personally don't really like the fights in the Pokemon anime and enjoy the more systematic fights like in the games. That's why I find the strength of scaling very unfamiliar and very unrealistic. Not for me although it's probably very good for readers who like the anime. Character Design: This is the best part of the story and all I can say is I'm impressed, author. Although I usually don't like when the mc is too young I can say that it probably couldn't be implemented any better. the character's dialogue is fantastic, even though we've only ever talked to 10 year olds so far. Conclusion: I like this story and the only reason why it is not a 5 is because it has too many clichés. For example: Has Steven and Cynthia as his only friends, although he doesn't have memories of his old life to influence that. Although the conclusion sounds a bit negative, I like this story a lot and it's easy to count the things I don't like about this story as the ones I like. To author: Good job and I hope you continue with this great story with a lot of potential.