Review Detail of ILikecultivation in Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Here is what I think about this Fanfic: 1: The Writing and Grammar: Unless you are one of those who want everything PERFECT, the writing quality and grammar is one of the best in this FF. Author barely makes a mistake but also corrects it when its found. So 5 star there 2: Update Rate: we have 10 chapters so far within two days. But the author is going to drop the rate but it is still 2 chapters every other day which is really good. So 5 star there 3: Story Development: The story so far is going at a good pace and does not feel slow or too fast. Not a typical Riolu, Ralts or Dratini which makes the Mc too op too soon but rather his first pokemon had good potential yet he is working hard to make it strong. I mean the first fight was a perfect fight between two ten year old kids. so 5 Star there. 4: Character Design: I love the Mc, he is not stupid but also not a 'strategy guy.' Very realistic, I mean how many of us claim ourselves to calculate every step we take? It is great to see for once a normal Mc which is of course not stupid but not overly smart. Just a normal, like me. So I like it. 5 star there. 5: World Background: An interesting concept has been introduced and I am looking forward to how it goes. He at least have no system which I like. Just the foreshadowing of some ideas he has given to us is mind-blowing. But I will still give it 4 star there as those ideas have not bloomed yet and that the story is still going. To those who see this before reading, just a heads up, my personally opinion but I loved the ending of the prologue, couldnt have been better. To author: Just like the Mc says, "I don't give a flying Duck," I also want you to not give a Flying Duck about some who say it is not a good ff. It is a very good ff and you are a very good writer. if anyone tell you 'Not good grammar' tell em to write there own then. Smh, people really want perfect grammar when half of em can't write. Me included XD Best of luck for the ff, I hope you get success.