Review Detail of RedGunner in Pokemon: Blood Bonds

For now,, it's a 4 star. Mainly by the fact on how similar it is to Pokemon: Medieval Era Writing quality is alright but needs a lot of improvement. There are mistakes here and there but it's readable. Mainly the commas and some grammatical errors in the sentence.... I hope you proof read or use Grammarly to make it better Story development is decent until now but Character design needs some improvement. In some places the talk between characters is quite plain but would imagine this is your first time writing so I will go easy on that. Update stability is a 5 star as they seem pretty fast. World background would have been 5 if not for how every thing almost resembles Medieval Era fanfic on this site. The red eyes, ability, potential, and even the concept..... I was slightly disappointed with this but will surely re-review it after 30 chapters. I want to see more development so that I can see the improvement in various departments.