I never understood the fact that MCs sleep with the exact same person as the real character was sleeping so anyway so we have the typical but problematic cliché. A system that is too arrogant and above all too present, not really letting the MC develop on its own. Nick Fury who always finds the MC while the organization of the guy is filled with Hydra. With the advantages this MC possesses he should have been able to fool SHIELD so... Not logical. MC will of course work for Fury which is only a source of problems and above all a slowdown in the project and also it's like working for Hydra. With Hydra who will know for the family, friend of the MC and these guys don't play it but hey. This may be the MC's first story where he hasn't really received a heartfelt review. I am an author and believe me reviews help a lot. I hope this story will improve, good luck to the author
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