Why is the MC so stupid?, he makes all the wrong decisions . This story copies Chinese clichés and forgets that the mc is Philippian, he knows that gangs are outside at night, so he goes out at night and says to himself well I'm going to avoid them, without information, without anything and is surprised when he is attacked . He tells his sister he no longer needs work and insists she not ask questions, it's so embarrassing, I view interactions with his sister with such contempt that it's unnatural , he doesn't focus on what's important, out of the neighborhood, he doesn't lie about the money but says to trust him, just an idiot

The story was barely readable at first, but by the time she meets Margaret, it's gone to shit, these interactions with Daenerys are awkward

We can see the lack of intelligence of the MC and the fact that all this sex spoils the story, we wanted to see some world-building done well but we had a whore (the mc) amazed by sex and without thought process, it's sad the idea behind it is good but the author wanted to write porn and very bad porn at that, I read a lot of porn on shady sites but This is so poorly written that it makes me cringe. It deserves a complete rewrite.

Everything is forced in this story, the dialogue, the unfolding of the story, he annoys me with the fact that he can't tell his father that he's a Stark and not an Arryn, he acts like a male version of Mary Sue, everything goes his way and no one notices him when he wants to .

We can see that in this story, the mc lacks intelligence and is a bit of a Mary Sue , he tells his father about his magical powers in a society where he will be burned for heresy , he's like a sorcerer in the middle of the Vatican even his parents would have been afraid of him, there is no reason to talk about these auras, he buys slaves quietly in the middle of westeros , calm , the guy lives in fairyland as Marie Sue

Impossible to immerse myself and enjoy the story , the words seem awkward, forced dialogues , these exploits seem like nothing with this kind of. the idea is good but the story deserves a rewrite

The first chapter determined the continuation of the story , this cliché hated by all is stupid,he shouldn't have been born with so many eyes , kokushibo had a human face before , he should have been born with a human face , his energy should not have bothered so much , Kushina was a receptacle of Biju but it is not visible from the outside , he hasn't grown enough to emit that much and would have grown to control it before it was noticed , The hokage would not abandon the child. he's the guy who turned his kid into a demon vessel for the good of the Village , he would have made him a weapon of the Village . In short, the author is not very good at creating a plot worthy of reading, he just took a few things from the existing pile but without improvement

MC is just a p*dophile who has the chance to be reborn, attracted to Hinata because she is submissive, and grooms him from an early age, what is attractive about an 11-year-old? I don't know, suddenly The MC wants to have his organization start with Zazuba and at that moment the story loses all interest. Without this romance and attraction to children, this insane desire. GOD, this story would have been a masterpiece. So sad

I guess it's crack*sigh* I stop here

Good story, good development , I liked watching the path taken by the MC, there are less clichés than we are used to finding in this kind of story , but the last chapter ....it's bullshit , it could have ruined everything, fortunately it's only a chapter, the harem, the final decisions , it's very disappointing , but everything else is fine. Congratulations to the author

Good start ! the story is at a point where the author could ruin everything , I'm crossing my fingers that that doesn't happen. Harem, friendly MC with Konoha, I hope he will be indifferent to other villages and people and recruit, steal people discreetly , I can't wait who becomes Hokage, he will never be able to change the world but I wish he would do what Hashimara just wanted to drive Konoha crazy , Increase the age of diplomas but especially of missions outside the village , do not send children under 15 outside , three studies and one jonin by teams and good training , deal with the Daimayo discreetly, mind control or otherwise and replace him when the time comes. Avoid wars as much as possible let other idiots kill themselves. This kind of things .I can not wait

Well !it's disappointing . I expected better, I was quite excited to read the story with this crossover but we have a stupid mc who talks about these future changes to his ninja father loyal to the clan , a six year old child, yeah he's pretty stupid .the story is not well written , plot holes not explaining why he's the only one special enough to be retarded , stupid enough not to greet the elders without thinking of the consequences for him and his family in short, a little egoist with a lot of money

Great chapter !! I really hope Otto or Alicent has an accident before this wedding

I think this should be the moment where the twins realize that yes this is not a game.I hope that we will move forward in the story without the shadow of following the canon that the author leaves lying around . We are here for the papill effects, the fact that everything has remained the same is pure madness , Otto should be killed quietly , Nyra is a doctor she knows what she must give to end her life

Daemon is so OCC he never coveted the throne and always respected his father's decisions, even the bad ones.

MC is not a villain, just a mentally ill person with a pedophile tendency with plot armor superior to Naruto, A poorly written and disgusting MarySue, thinking better than

Honestly, stupid logic in the Chinese way, MC with a very low IQ, the guy has a multidimensional system and the best thing he finds among them is the T virus while there are so many serums with the same effect but without the consequences , the guy is stupid and arrogant

Oh stupid desires for greatness, I stop [img=disgusted]

I'm in love

best jjk SI fanfictions yet , it does not attract unnecessary attention , he didn't go to jujutsu school early , I like the fact that he accepts Gojo's protection not to be used by the elders , These first 10 chapters are really great! I hope the quality doesn't drop