There are few things I hate more than fanfiction writers disrespecting the source material. If you are going to borrow another person's work as the setting for your story, and the story is not an AU, respect the setting and do your due diligence. If you are going to borrow a character someone else has created, do your due diligence. The setting, the characters, the timeline, the way the world operates and the rules that govern it, all of these things should be accurate representations of the original work. It doesn't take much research to ensure you are doing right by the source material as well as by its fans. This story is not an AU so it can't use "creative liberties" as an excuse. It has gotten a number of things wrong, from the abilities and capabilities of Demon Slayers, to those of the demons. What's more the MC isn't fleshed out as a character, he's got no personality at all. Lastly the author seems committed to checkmark every single fanfiction stereotype off of the proverbial list. The death of the parents to demons, the "completely unexpected" death of his caretaker and fellow orphans to a demon, followed by the revenge arch ... really? Also the system is not at all fleshed out. The author should try to be more original with their writing, not conform to every possible stereotype, and research the original work a little before and as they are writing. The only saving grace of this story is that at least this author has proper grammar, or knows how to use a spellchecker.
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Thanks brother, For saving mine self's time.
keep up the great work dude. I aint gonna read this if theres tons of stuff not in line with the original story
thanks man, now I don't have to waste my time with this keep up the Good work!
Thanks man, you are a hero. I hope the author sees this and learns from this.
