There are few things I hate more than fanfiction writers disrespecting the source material. If you are going to borrow another person's work as the setting for your story, and the story is not an AU, respect the setting and do your due diligence. If you are going to borrow a character someone else has created, do your due diligence. The setting, the characters, the timeline, the way the world operates and the rules that govern it, all of these things should be accurate representations of the original work. It doesn't take much research to ensure you are doing right by the source material as well as by its fans. This story is not an AU so it can't use "creative liberties" as an excuse. It has gotten a number of things wrong, from the abilities and capabilities of Demon Slayers, to those of the demons. What's more the MC isn't fleshed out as a character, he's got no personality at all. Lastly the author seems committed to checkmark every single fanfiction stereotype off of the proverbial list. The death of the parents to demons, the "completely unexpected" death of his caretaker and fellow orphans to a demon, followed by the revenge arch ... really? Also the system is not at all fleshed out. The author should try to be more original with their writing, not conform to every possible stereotype, and research the original work a little before and as they are writing. The only saving grace of this story is that at least this author has proper grammar, or knows how to use a spellchecker.

Author here with a shameless review, thanks for reading my novel[img=faceslap][img=coins][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Looking forward to different ice forms to be unlocked. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

a very good demon slay fanfic its hard to find these so thank you very much I look foward to reading future chapters and ill definitely reccomd this if I find someone looking for a good demon slayer fanfic

It's a standard edgy MC fanfic put into a world he thinks is just an animation and not a world he's living in. You know the usual. Average for the most part nothing really noteworthy

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Okay an Author always wants a review (Honest one)so here it is First thing 1:-Writing quality-- there are some flaws that can be fixed if u can use grammarly (no sponsor) or you could just ignore this is no professionalism. 2:- story has been great so far this is about 20th ch so future readers don't mind me it only is above starting let's see.Also make this one AS realistic as possible (plz no harem) only a shonen enjoyer can understand that. 3:- character design has no flaws for me idk about the others and if u can don't make him foolish make him smart atleast.Cuz sometimes his words are just plain.(advice only) 4:- and here we are at the worst one I respect the author but just tell us a stable timetable you will post a ch and how long if u can make it 4ch per week and 2000-3000words or 1000-2000 one ch per week i am no writer if you get writer block then i am sry 😔 this can clear some questions 5:- working background i didn't understand this one so correct me if i am wrong but your writing manner is not gud take the exams of (HP- A magical journey) that world be best but as I say (this is no patryon or professionali only author choice ). That's it if u can read this thing I just wrote it in 4 min without much thinking so don't accuse me if you disagree. goodbye 👋

Nice story. Nice Job. Hope for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!