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Review Detail of Spelloyal in The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv111yrSpelloyal

I'll be clear and direct, the fanfic in general is good and interesting, but the author always completely ruins things when he tries to put drama in the story. Basically everything but the drama is really well done and an 8/10, but when the author tries to create chapters focused on drama with the MC going through problems like depression, facing the past and etc the author spoils it so completely that I want to drop the fanfic. We recently had the author forcing the drama with MC making an extremely stupid and unnecessary decision that even in chapter 166 almost made me drop the fanfic. I honestly can't recommend this fanfic to new readers because despite being a fun and interesting read it comes along with some of the worst and most frustrating chapters to read I've ever seen in my 15 years as an otaku (ignoring truly rubbish stories where the author doesn't even try)

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The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

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WiLeYBiGhEaD
WiLeYBiGhEaDLv11WiLeYBiGhEaD

Stopped reading a while ago for the exact same reasons. Stopped by to see if things changed. Glad I left when I did.

TrashHeap
TrashHeapLv4TrashHeap

This perfectly encapsulates my thoughts on the story.