Item: Spirit Soul
Rating: 5
Author: Idczhen

IdczhenLv142yr

2022-01-04 12:03

Cover: 5/5 Let's just say I have never seen such an amazing cover before. The realistic artwork and the blue soul next to the main character almost brings life to the character itself. The cover was well drawn out and fits the title completely. Synopsis: 4.5/5 I can tell much work had been through with the short yet informative synopsis that gives a glimpse to us reader about the novel itself. Author has successfully hand out a good amount of information for us to know what we are going to expect. Grammar: 4.7/5 So far, there aren't any noticeable grammar mistake that can be spotted at first glance. We can very much understand what the author is trying to portray, so not much complaint here. Update: 5/5 As far as I can tell from this review I'm writing at the moment [1/3/2022], update releases are fantastic. Storyline: 4.8/5 Although some plotline are generic or even cliche at times, I think this story is unique in itself with the "soul" part. And everyone has different opinion regarding their likes and dislikes. Thus, I can say this is a novel that I particularly enjoy and it's my opinion, not yours, Overall: 4.8/5 I will say this again, HideousGrain has proven himself to be a capable author of storytelling again. If you're a fan of this work, then you should probably check out his other novel as well, namely, "God's Eye" and "Primordial Dimensions". And of course, a shameless input here to end the long review and your reward for reading. Check out "Harness Cultivator". Thank you and goodbye!

Spirit Soul

HideousGrain

4.6

305 Chs

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