Review Detail of SirKeima in White Online

How is it possible for every character, whether friend or foe, to be annoying? They definitely don't act human, at least I've never encountered a human that talks the way these characters do. They act more like puppets coded by rat wizards to emulate human personality traits. Includes: 1) Female that immediately becomes lovestruck upon seeing MC's face 2) Unreasonably dickhead male 3) Friendly but goofy male 4) Higher level entity that acts mysterious Characters are definitely my biggest problem with this book, they act too anime-like hence 1 star.The other parts aren't as bad tho. Writing quality is a bit shaky at first but gets better later. This one is fine. 4 star Updates seem to be regular. 5 star When it comes to world building, there seems to be an underlying mysterious connection with the game world and the real one. Also a MC back story that gets expanded upon later. Not too out there but at least there is an attempt to make something special. However I could not get myself to feel invested in it because I did not care about the characters enough. As for the story development, there isn't really a story to speak of. All in all, the dialogue definitely needs some work. But if you feel like you can wade through all of the sock puppet-like characters there is actually plenty of sweet action scenes.