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SirKeima23dCommentedCh 1 00 - The Ending- SirKeima5mthCommented
Inala and Grehha teaming up together is legitimately my favorite thing on webnovel
'Wait!' He shuddered upon thinking of their first interaction. It was Inala that shouted to get Grehha's help in closing the entrance to the academy's shelter during the First Minor Crisis. - SirKeima7mthReplied to Xeno_Fan92It was an elixir that could turn a cultivator with five-elemental spiritual roots into one with dual-elemental spiritual roots!detailI Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation NovelEastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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- SirKeima1yrCommented
This is why I read fantasy
However, redirecting some of that money wasn't much of a problem, and so in under a week I managed to build a healthcare system that looks free! - SirKeima1yrReplied to hydrocyanic_acid
Golden comment.
Well, now isn't that some people's wet dream for a fan-fiction. I scoffed. Naruto was done dirty in the war arch. And honestly, who gives a fuck about Senju, other than some reincarnation shit, no one cared about who the Senju's were. They were that dead, before the canon even started. Except for Hashirama… I didn't like Tobirama one bit. - SirKeima1yrCommented
Would it not be better to make her the Goddess of Mysticism and Magic? Wisdom isn't her territory, and it might affect her anchors. I get the need to fuck over Herabergen but it still seems illogical.
The religion of the Goddess of Wisdom blatantly preached that their Goddess was the true embodiment of knowledge, while the God of Knowledge and Wisdom was nothing but a charlatan. - SirKeima1yrCommented
Ah yes, the beef stew.
And it all started with me, wanting for a beef stew. - SirKeima1yrCommented
spelling is hard
[Confratualtions you have bought Knowledge in a random subject-Quantity 5: - SirKeima2yrCommented
A True American...
The grenadiers would clear buildings by lobbing their grenades inside and waiting for the blast before storming in with their muskets loaded and ready with bayonets affixed. Berengar did not care about civilian casualties in a warzone; he only cared about how efficiently his army could handle the task with minimal casualties on his own side. - SirKeima2yrPosted
How is it possible for every character, whether friend or foe, to be annoying? They definitely don't act human, at least I've never encountered a human that talks the way these characters do. They act more like puppets coded by rat wizards to emulate human personality traits. Includes: 1) Female that immediately becomes lovestruck upon seeing MC's face 2) Unreasonably dickhead male 3) Friendly but goofy male 4) Higher level entity that acts mysterious Characters are definitely my biggest problem with this book, they act too anime-like hence 1 star.The other parts aren't as bad tho. Writing quality is a bit shaky at first but gets better later. This one is fine. 4 star Updates seem to be regular. 5 star When it comes to world building, there seems to be an underlying mysterious connection with the game world and the real one. Also a MC back story that gets expanded upon later. Not too out there but at least there is an attempt to make something special. However I could not get myself to feel invested in it because I did not care about the characters enough. As for the story development, there isn't really a story to speak of. All in all, the dialogue definitely needs some work. But if you feel like you can wade through all of the sock puppet-like characters there is actually plenty of sweet action scenes.
- SirKeima2yrCommentedCh 707 Chapter 702: Quake the World