I for one would love to see this story come to it's completion, it has a very interesting start. The only thing that bugs me is that we have no other strong character to compare to the mc's power scale to, there needs to be a clear understanding of the worlds power scale and where the mc stands on that scale. Oh and a bit more world background is needed.
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