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there are more ad chapters than real chapters. The start feels rushed, and the characters feel hollow.
I for one would love to see this story come to it's completion, it has a very interesting start. The only thing that bugs me is that we have no other strong character to compare to the mc's power scale to, there needs to be a clear understanding of the worlds power scale and where the mc stands on that scale. Oh and a bit more world background is needed.
I loved your novel until the mc called Hagrid a smelly professor and wanted to steal his dragon egg, it is not personal. Hagrid is just my favourite HP character, that is my reason for dropping. Note to author; you can improve your click rate by using a spell checker. not to make you feel down about writing... Your English just needs some more work. You have potential.
The request was for the author to use a spell checker, I want to read the novel but it gives me a headache, I repeated please for the comment word count. It looks like a good novel, the novel caught my interest. My request was only for the author to use Grammarly, it is in simplified Chinese. [img=faceslap][img=recommend]
his, he is male so his. if it is al female it is her.
Magic is an object in English so instead of she, magic should be an it