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2024-03-14 23:52

Love the character development and story line!! 10 out of 10 recommend !!

My Possessive Vampire Mafia

Kailykilimo
4.8
152 Chs

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Thank you so much for your feedback dear xx.

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Okay, this is amazing! I already love novels with vampires but this one is just extraordinary. Not only that but the way the author describes everything is also *chef kiss* I think this one has a lot of potential ^^

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Unique! Becoming a vampire through a drug is quite a new turn to the normal vampire stories. The execution of the plot is perfectly done. Infact, felt jealous of FL for having such an interesting and exciting life. Love her attitude and the way she thinks! Apart from the few punctuation and grammatical mistakes, everything about the novel is good. Will surely continue reading the rest!!! Keep Going!!!

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The way the story relates to reality is quite uncanny, Kaily has a way with her writing. Top top work on this vampire story. The plot and character designer are really good. I love it,

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