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Excelsior_x
Excelsior_xLv32yr
2022-03-28 18:50

A unique story that is well written. You feel tragic and helplessness of the characters in the first few chapters. It's light hearted at some points. it's still early chapters so there is still some world building as the chapters progress. Let's get some more chapters please

My Possessive Vampire Mafia

Kailykilimo
4.8
152 Chs

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Kailykilimo
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Thank you for the review, more chaps are on the way.

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