Review Detail of ACoolUsername in The Hospital's Elevator

It's a nice book and the story has a good plot too but there are a few mistakes you need to fix like the words/grammar and there is too much dialog, but it's ok because you are still a beginner. I'm not saying I don't like your book its actually a great book I'm just giving you some tips. I'm waiting for the nest chapter but you can take your time. Keep up the hard work :>