It's a nice book and the story has a good plot too but there are a few mistakes you need to fix like the words/grammar and there is too much dialog, but it's ok because you are still a beginner. I'm not saying I don't like your book its actually a great book I'm just giving you some tips. I'm waiting for the nest chapter but you can take your time. Keep up the hard work :>

Reading this book was an awesome experience. I'd recommend reading this if ur looking for something to read.👏👍 Keep going author! We'll support u