Writing Quality: The writing is good, and it didn't affect my reading at all. But the author needs to edit the grammatical errors. I advise the author to download or go to Grammarly.com and do simple editing. It'll only take 15 to 20 minutes for each chapter. Once you do that, the whole novel will appear like polished iron. Stability of Updates: No idea. But there is no update for more than a month. Story development: It's good so far. This looked more like a Kingdom Building at first and is going well. Character Design: There is a lack of character description in this book. Simply mentioning Burly man won't do good. It's better to add more descriptions like how his eyes look, his face, skin tone, hair color, and so on. World Background: Pretty good so far. As long as the author clears these simple mistakes, this book will turn into a good one.
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