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Captain_Apocalypse
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good story but I wish it would focus more on the mc than everybody else. There are hardly any interactions with the mc but there are tons of interactions with background characters. i could only see about 5-6 paragraphs about the mc in the entire story, the reset were about dawn, hela, Selene, basically it doesn't feel like a regular story and more of one that focuses on other characters that aren't the protagonist

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Well thanks for the honest review, I appreciate it 😊. And I understand your critique too, so I'll be giving the protagonist some more screen time without having to sacrifice any important part for the background characters 😊

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