the girl who lifts

Another short chapter. Something this author has in common with his other stories, but that doesn't mean I hate them. I just wish they were longer

Yeah. What I've read so far reminded me of the one vladfallen wrote in wattpad

Ya know, I remember this story from wattpad a couple of years ago. Are you the author, or did you copy the premise of the story.

Really good story. I don't know what the people who leave bad reviews are smoking, but I want some, lol. If you dont like the story, then don't read it, pretty simple. Now I get the need to leave reviews that help the author improve, but all I'm seeing is people whine and cry about "brainless mc," "overpowered mc," etc. I don't see how that will help the author improve on the story. There are some good reviews with low stars, but a lot of them are whining. To the author, you're doing a good job. I like your other books and hope they continue to be a great read. Keep up the work, and don't let bad criticism get to you

I know it's a little late, but you missed an opportunity to say, "Fetch me his soul"

What a pleasant read. The flow of the story was nice, and the grammar was very good. The story was well written, and I hope it continues to do so. Keep up the good work!

You know, this story isn't bad. Sure, I saw a few grammar errors, but besides that, not much else. Good job. Keep up the good work Author!

it's good to see more chapters in this story. Though are you author San going to keep releasing chapters or are you gonna drop it?

Lovely story so far! The grammar is smooth from what I've read so far. Keep up the good work, and I hope the story grows strong.

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Beautiful story, it's well written and immersive. Keep up the good work author and remember to rest once in a while

Beautiful story. Well written, excellent character development, grammar was superb. The jokes were very funny, had me giggling like a school girl talking about her crush. The chapters were very long, which I loved. Overall, everything was 5/5. I would like to see this continued with Sao 2, elveheim, and Gun Gale online. GGO is where I think Tyler would shine. Beautifully written!