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No_One_1398
No_One_1398Lv141yr
2023-03-06 18:40

The grammar is barely readable. The MC is a walking definition of Gary sue, character development sucks. There are many inconsistencies such as the bs of ‘unlocking chakra’ and the mc being a jōnin level ninja at 5, it is just too much. The author messes up a few facts from Naruto, such as the ‘yellow flash’ name origin. Additionally every interaction is forced, every single character he meets know his father and are either his enemies or close friends. And much much more.

Genius of the leaf

The_Hollow
3.5
229 Chs

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Chips_8019
Chips_8019Lv3

The grammar and the story so far is passable but the characters in the story are just way too unrealistic For example the hokage gives a kid who hasn't unlocked his chakra a s rank technique because the mc wanted one with reason being and I quote "you want strong Shinobi's right"

2yr

brokeassnigga
brokeassniggaLv4

was looking for a story without harem, I had to scroll through about 100 to find this one for that alone here's 4 stars. djy

2yr
Sangrail97
Sangrail97Lv4

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3yr
Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1

I don't know why this has a high rating?. but I think this is very cringe, bad grammar even if translated. Broken dialogues and too many dialogues in 1 chapter. lack of narration, so readers can't imagine what the MC is doing.

2yr
ghost_kuro
ghost_kuroLv1

to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31.

2yr
ssyffix
ssyffixLv4

I love it. Feels good inside to read this :) I appreciate the character interactions. The progression is handled really nicely. Overall great vibe. Keep up the good work, yo. 🥑

2yr
TIFOEL
TIFOELLv1

Первые главы ДЕЙСТВИТЕЛЬНО плохие! Я продержался глав 5... я уже дважды начинаю читать вспоминаю сюжет и бросаю. Слишком много бонусов со старта у героя. Встреча с Дирайей и с Хокаге... ребенка! Это так глупо... И все про него знают и все хотят его убить и гениальный он... о боже... и поселить его к Хатаке когда он Узумаки Учиха... бред!! Намного лучше бы было прочитать про обычного шиноби пробудившего память. В крайнем случае в кланового шиноби... но не в какноничного персонажа. И хотелось бы что бы это было до 2 мировой войны... Подскажите, кто сможет, такой фанфик, можно не на этом сайте.

1yr
Otaku_phantom
Otaku_phantomLv1

Well nice one the story is great about a genius well not going to give spoilers about it...support the writer for the effort to make us readers happy.

2yr
CasualNaphu
CasualNaphuLv3

Good Naruto fics are hard to come by, but this one doesn't disappoint! The author has a good grasp of the established universe despite the invented techniques/powers. He doesn't fail to make it entertaining and enjoyable for readers familiar with Masashi Kishimoto's work. All in all, I'd suggest trying this for anyone dropping by. You won't regret it!

2yr
Kronos01
Kronos01Lv3

MC is stupid. Just a warning before you start reading.

1yr
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