No_One_1398
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- No_One_13986 days agoReplied to Professor_Light
Fun fact: There is no legal drinking age in china, your parents decide when you can drink.
- No_One_13989 days agoReplied to Boy_in_time
If you are using Chat GPT, you can use GPT models, specifically designed for specific tasks. (Ex: „Write for me”) Also, some of these models are programmed to humanize the text, so you can also put it through that. Your webnovel very much reminds me of „King”, you can learn a bit from its free-chapters. At some point in the future, if you improve your writing I might return and read your webnovel again, and subsequently improve its rating. Anyway, good luck with the novel, hope you improve, the concept has strong potential.
- No_One_13989 days agoPosted
It’s mid at best. The concept is good, but because it was written by an AI over half of the novel is pointless filler or repetition. Some characters behave as the situation requires, not exhibiting specific characteristics. The Viscount/Count, (depending on what the AI wishes at the moment) can be an example of that.
- No_One_139810 days agoCommented
His name was Rohl, no? And the other one’s was Kaise…
- No_One_139812 days agoReplied to House_of_Tales
Btw, you don’t need „the” before „house Reyne”, it’s a proper noun, so you don’t need to specify it is THE House Reyne, there is only one.
This paragraph has been deleted. - No_One_139812 days agoCommented
Minor nitpick 2: there is no feudal hierarchy in Westeros, so all lords are just „Lord X” or „Lord Paramount X” if they rule the entire region. So Tywin would be a Lord Paramount, not a Duke.
This paragraph has been deleted. - No_One_139812 days agoCommented
Minor nitpick, but all ”families” in Westeros should be referred to as „House X”, otherwise you break immersion.
This paragraph has been deleted. - No_One_139812 days agoPosted
Great WebNovel, problem is, a longer version exists under the name Royal Battle.
- No_One_139813 days agoPosted
Easily top 10 asoiaf fanfictions, inteligent MC, good concept, excellent writing quality and very frequent updates.
- No_One_139814 days agoReplied to Roundbreez
You are aware this story has been dropped months ago? I have no intention of continuing it, it’s only purpose was to test how chat-gpt premium worked, and if it could actually write something. Well, the answer is no, it is shit, and writes at a level comparable to Chinese MTL’s. If you want to have a flick with the concept, go at it, but I assume that you approach writers precisely because you aren’t good at actually writing. Anyway, I wish you good luck with finding another user you can help with their work, should they be interested in your assistance.
