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In my opinion this is very much like Game of Thrones, it starts of great with intriguing plots and alternate character, but it loses its allure at around chapter 90. The characters feel more one-dimensional and generally it feels like the author just really really hates the lannisters, and takes any excuse to kill or maim one.
I came across something similar on WebNovel, but it is a bad Chinese translation, so I dropped it after like 5 chapters, I have no idea what it’s called, though you could probably find it under the got tag.
First of all, a translation of this already exists. Furthermore, this “novel” is utterly unreadable, due to the lack of proper sentence structure and world-building inconsistencies.
A relatively standard novel, with decent English and some grammatical errors. The characters feel one-dimensional,. For example, the test examiner is just “hate”, with no apparent depth beyond that. The world building is very lackluster, about it we only know about the tests, and that is it, though that could be due to the early stage of the novel. The test itself, in fact, is completely detached from realism, with contradicting motives of its organisers and the random selections of only 5000 people/year, has the author forgotten there are over 8 billion humans on earth?
Not sure if it is relevant, but this section is reserved for promising Chinese novels translated by WebNovel’s team.
That is correct, however it is not based on any of the rating criteria. Considering the review is the average of „Writing Quality”, „Story Developement”, „Updating Stability”, „World Building” and „Character Design”. So, can you tell me how come you rated all of them as 1/5 star without having read the novel, while citing an „afterword” comment as a review?
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Can you explain why you have this novel a 1/5 star rating, without even bothering to read it?
Upon further review, the author has significantly improved their writing skills from ch. 50 to 51, to the point it qualifies as an actual novel instead of a child’s ramblings. From chapter 51, it is actually readable, though it remains to be seen whether the author can keep up the quality.