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No_One_1398

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  • No_One_1398a day ago
    Replied to OukisLips

    I came across something similar on WebNovel, but it is a bad Chinese translation, so I dropped it after like 5 chapters, I have no idea what it’s called, though you could probably find it under the got tag.

  • No_One_13987 days ago
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    First of all, a translation of this already exists. Furthermore, this “novel” is utterly unreadable, due to the lack of proper sentence structure and world-building inconsistencies.

  • No_One_139821 days ago
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    A relatively standard novel, with decent English and some grammatical errors. The characters feel one-dimensional,. For example, the test examiner is just “hate”, with no apparent depth beyond that. The world building is very lackluster, about it we only know about the tests, and that is it, though that could be due to the early stage of the novel. The test itself, in fact, is completely detached from realism, with contradicting motives of its organisers and the random selections of only 5000 people/year, has the author forgotten there are over 8 billion humans on earth?

  • No_One_13982 months ago
    Replied to Ialynch

    Not sure if it is relevant, but this section is reserved for promising Chinese novels translated by WebNovel’s team.

  • No_One_13983 months ago
    Replied to Nexluz

    That is correct, however it is not based on any of the rating criteria. Considering the review is the average of „Writing Quality”, „Story Developement”, „Updating Stability”, „World Building” and „Character Design”. So, can you tell me how come you rated all of them as 1/5 star without having read the novel, while citing an „afterword” comment as a review?

  • No_One_13983 months ago
    Replied to No_One_1398

    *h->g

  • No_One_13983 months ago
    Replied to Nexluz

    Can you explain why you have this novel a 1/5 star rating, without even bothering to read it?

  • No_One_13983 months ago
    Replied to No_One_1398

    Upon further review, the author has significantly improved their writing skills from ch. 50 to 51, to the point it qualifies as an actual novel instead of a child’s ramblings. From chapter 51, it is actually readable, though it remains to be seen whether the author can keep up the quality.

  • No_One_13983 months ago
    Posted

    This book is completely unreadable, considering its lack of grammatical coherence. The author most definitely is not qualified to write a book in English, in fact, Chinese MTL’s are of a significantly higher quality… and that’s a low bar…

  • No_One_13985 months ago
    Replied to JoanMcKnight475

    Sure, as long as you don’t insult me.