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CPT_SpaKeLzLv42yr
2023-04-05 12:53

Author! At the start the story was great but you made MC very boring. Like how he talks less and sometimes become a background character. Shows no emotion. And stop with the exhibitionism fetish of his. You might have that fetish, i understand but pls thats disgusting. How he sexually acts Infront of others its disgusting. Make him a gentleman. Remember he is from a high class family and a otaku. Make him interact more but still keeping the cold facade. Either do this or your novel is going down the drain. And by the way pls make him use some kisaragi weapons. He has many advanced weapons and making him use magic all the time. Its a modern novel not a magical girl one.

Reincarnated in gate op

Keisolu
4.6
38 Chs

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Keisolu
KeisoluAuthor

Sorry for the bad translation, I'll make sure to fix it, and please comment, and if you ask, yes, I'll be a narcissist and give myself five stars.

3yr

El_Tobi0999
El_Tobi0999Lv3

I recommend using Grammarly to fix some paragraphs. ..........................................................................................

3yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The story is boring. MC is OP and consequently very boring. The only thing that interests Mc is to be OP, easily creating abilities and objectives to make him more powerful in the entire omniverse. It's illogical how easy it becomes to OP. Considering that other being (R.O.B.) was the one who gave him the opportunity to transmigrate and make wishes.

3yr
SomethingMalefic
SomethingMaleficLv2

so far the characters seem bland pieces of cardboard. the long useless info dump paragraphs give me a headache. not updated in a few months so its probably dropped. quality is bad, keeps on switching between genders and such.

2yr
Taylor_Lopez
Taylor_LopezLv3

love it please make more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Absolute_Qlipoth
Absolute_QlipothLv4

The Story was nice The introduction was ok And the characters was amazing Anyway this is not related to the topic but Can you recommended a type of novel like noragami where there's many god and mc was a powerful god I accept Webnovel,Fanfiction.net,Royalroad,Wattpad,etc

2yr
LazyErosage
LazyErosageLv3

Here, a five-star from a fellow Author and a avid reader. Keep up the good work even though I haven't read it yet but I do hope it turns out a good one so good luck with that.

2yr
MadLogic999
MadLogic999Lv4

4.6⭐ because its one of the few gate fanfics. The fanfic is good and it's well written though there are few grammatical errors. The MC is very very very OP. The God that reincarnated him gives him wishes which literally makes him more like a God of creation as he can create from literally nothing. The romance and harem though is somewhat forced but it's still okay since it's gate fanfic and the original girls supposed to fell in love with Itami fell for him. Hopes for more updates. Thanks for the ff.

3yr
Sommerscave
SommerscaveLv15

I like/love the fact that this is a Gate Fanfiction i will make another review If i reach chapter 10 but Till then i am Just Happy Someone is making a Gate Fanfic.

3yr
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