Review Detail of bla_blupp in Kan-Gar-Chu! (One Piece fanfic)

Its super bloated like really. You can cut down 70% of this fic. I dont now how people can read something like this when it was fresh just to wait for chapter karate Island 44. Writing is good fanfic is just like a Film before editing. Mc was strange i dont want to meet such a person in real life she is f crazy.