Its super bloated like really. You can cut down 70% of this fic. I dont now how people can read something like this when it was fresh just to wait for chapter karate Island 44. Writing is good fanfic is just like a Film before editing. Mc was strange i dont want to meet such a person in real life she is f crazy.

This is still a copy from author cloud9 meddeling giant just he cut chapters apart for more chapters. Even the chapter names are the same. Go die in a corner you parasite.

No he does not. The author wants him to behave in such a manner. Its the only template xianxia mc has. Its Always mc Enemies are super evil because its easy for mc to go on a Killing Spree after because mc is not so evil as enemy. Its 99% of the time the same. I now you just translate i said your translation is good i just tried to save some people time. 👍

Meh meh i go with flow i have no personality im the mc i do what im told. Mc is a robot a blank paper nothing interesting about him(but has all hakis btw.) Writing is good but why is only the mc soo boring i cant understand? Fights are good some chars arent canon but they are not badly written!!! Why is only the mc soo shit?

Translation is super. Mc is just your typical arrogant hypocritical mc xianxia style. I for one cant root for such an mc but thats just my opinion alone. This is just warning for people that dont like that so they can save time.

Translation is okay. Its just your typical chinese humor that destroys every goddamm chapter. Beginning is good but later chapers are suuper longwinded. Mc is soo funnny haha insider humor in a bloody battle not really a good time for that makes the battles not good to read. Battles are not funny in azeroth they should be grim or epic man. I only gibe positve for translation rest is garbage.

I stoppt at that chapter where he got stabbed. Sofar its just a canon rehash. Mc is op but he got of course wounded for plot sake. Its wonderfull writen but i can watch the films or read comics if i wanna read about cannon. Author said he will deviate from canon but have a few things stay the same. I for one dont like reading fanfiction where much stays the same, why read it if barly anything changes. Just why i like fanfics not that its bad or anything. Its a really good fanfic meaty chapters wonderful character interactions. Mc is not a blank character filled with power. He is perfectly written. Just not something i wanna read. I would love to read more but if he gets one time disabled for plot sake why not a second time or a third? Dont wanna waste my time reading meaty chapters just to get a fist in my nuts again.

Ohhh hahahahhaa soooo funny ass and viagra jokes soooo funny hhhaaaaaaahahahahahhaa. Just stop writing comedy please its not really funny. Im not 11 anymore mabe thats why. I now its a translation but i cant read more. Rest is all good you can just ignore the "jokes" and its a good start. Good translation so far. But its not for me. The jokes seems chinese not shure but all translation that i read from china have the same "humor".

Nop. Your not the first author that had that problem. Not shure but i dont think i find one on scribble or webnovel that could write that. Royalroad maybe. I would not have a problem if the first chapter didnt exist. 😅 but please keep it up rest was good. 👍

Its good. Mc is just again reborn from an old man in a young body and forgets all that and behaves like a teenager. For heavens sake he was 115. I dont understand if you cant write an old mc why write one. College was good a bit boring everything falls in his lap but not extreme. Keep it up but i stop reading. Dont like mc. Still good book to read if you like a young master. 👍

Ah thos 24/7 horny writers... Shut up stop writing every second a cringy sex joke. Its not funny just crappy mabe funny if you have the humor of a 12 year old. The fights are good but those crappy jokes destoy all semblance of a readable story. I now this is just a translation. Its good btw i tried to read mtl. Was not possible. Dont waste your time reading this. Its just a crappy version of the legendary mechnic. (Farming players like leeks etc.) Fights are the only good part but only until the blueballed writer needs to get e cringy joke out. If you have no problem with that its a good novel to read.

Fuck off add harem tag dont waste my time time to read 60 chapters. Oh yeah she doesnt mind alpha needs more females is she an animal? You just wanna write how he fucks widow. Damm letdown was a fun ride until then imma out bye. Middle earth was best part. Marvel is okey ocenworld a bit longwinded. Rest is all good i just dont read harem not my fantasy just like ntr. Just get angry when somthing good gets rekt. (From my perspective). Its your book.

Kingdombuilding is okey. I like the infos about technology. I just cant read the interaction betwenn characters i mean hello they are in what 1920 and every aristocrat behaves as if hes a 15 year old in 2020. The fu ck? Its better if you skip mc interaction with his sisters and every other female. He a prob 50 year old ceo of a massive company reborn not a teenager with hormon problems. Rest is stable. But not worth money.

Is that a copie from cloud 9 his novels is meddeling giant with the same beginning? Also on webnovel if so 1 star for copie without telling in the description

Stolen goods. Not recommend. Put your powerstone somewhere else. Hes not worth it. My hope for for good stories on webnovel gets smaller every book i try.

1 star for wasting my time. Add a tag for harem. Its not difficult? Finding a novel on webnovel is difficult enought. Dont waste peoples time to read something that they dont like.

Batman and guts deserve a happy end.

90% of this novel is reaction like uhh ah unbelievable how is this possible cant believe. Everybody is always in shock or denial. Rest is oke. I now this is just a translation so 3/5 is more than fair.

ff that makes me smile. Thank you i need that. Keep up the good story. I need just more.... I hope you keep it light not much drama. Genie is op if he wants. 👍

Yeah was good until now have fun with your harem. Not my fantasy. Please add a tag for harem next time. Makes people that hate that genre angry and it gets negative reviews.