I like your story very much. One of the big pluses is that you focus not only on Alyssia's adventures and development, but also on other characters showing how they develop. Another is the background of the world. I've read a lot of one-piece stories and most of them focus on Luffy and his crew, with some variations. The OCs most of the time join Luffy and follow Canon, showing little new stuff. Few of the ones that make their own path were so badly written that they were simply unreadable, and the ones that were really good were abandoned. So i gave my thanks to the Author for writing this story. I hope you will continue this until the end. Of course 5 stars from me. đ
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