Yo! Author here, and I'd like to review this one as a reader of my book. First and foremost, I gave it five stars because, well, why not? There's no rule that says I can't do it. Anyway, about this novel, I must say that I would like to highlight its main flaw, which is the lack of plot. Before returning to the past, the MC is the most prominent character in the game. He doesn't have an enemy, and he wasn't betrayed, so there's no redemption/revenge arc, etc., right? As a result, there is no plot in the novel. If you're looking for an avengers mmos story, unfortunately, brother and sister, this novel is just a bunch of empty air aimlessly wandering the land of adventures. I'm writing this novel to explore the imaginary game I'm envisioning. I wanted to put myself in the shoes of the MC to see what the game world was like. But of course, even it has no plot, the mc would still experience problems 'cause you see, life is not smooth sailing as always, you could agree. About the world background, I'm trying to establish it. Writing quality? Hahaha whatever. What about story development? The story would progress, but the MC's current attitude...well, you could say Ethan wasn't still showing all of his nature, but he won't develop because, in the first place, he was already a 31-year-old man who was mature but a little childish at times in his previous life. Update Stability? 1 chapter/day. There's a bonus chap (sometimes) in the day of Satur. I'm in school, bare with it! Lastly, you could treat this review as a Q&A tab. Do question anything. (About what is my favorite subject, it is break time.)
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LIKEIn his previous life, he played the game for ten years and there are no superpowers involved. However, it was not sure if in the current timeline, the situation is the same. What if...
Lazy_Chicken_God:Two questions 1. Any supernatural in the real world? 2. Romance/Harem?
Lazy_Chicken_God:Two questions 1. Any supernatural in the real world? 2. Romance/Harem?
Cnrd:In his previous life, he played the game for ten years and there are no superpowers involved. However, it was not sure if in the current timeline, the situation is the same. What if...image
does this have a harem?? I'm tired of mc's who refuse to have a harem because they want to be strong🤣🤣🤣🤣
Tunic01:that's not an answer... is it a romance/harem or a romance?