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mrant12
mrant12Author2yr
2022-03-29 21:50

Hi guys, this author review is around chapter 190 and I would like to say a few things. 1. A big THANK YOU to all of my readers, and for all of you who are rooting after Elliot, Jennifer, Jessica, Jessica, Wu Kong and Jules! I have a ton more surprises in store, it'll be a great ride ahead! *spoiler ahead* 2. To all my potential readers/supporters. All of the characters around the MC will be pretty strong, so don't worry too much about him having "baggage". 3. His two sisters are going to be epic down the line, so don't worry about that either. 4. There are races in this novel, but it will mostly deal with the beast system in the beginning. So don't expect to read about racing until around chapter 80. 5. My discord server has pictures and inspirations in it so you can have a richer reading experience. Do consider joining it! :D Overall, I think this is a fun LIGHT novel to read. I apologize if there are slight mistakes and slight plotholes, I am very open to questions and discussion, so feel free to drop your comments! Do try to give this novel a chance if you're thinking of reading it. Thank you!! :D

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Dieznuts69420
Dieznuts69420Lv14

Dieznuts, it is called webnovel if it is published in the web/internet. It is called Lightnovel if it is published outside the web and have a physical copy like a book. Anyway, I love reading your book so keep it up Auth👍🙂👍

mrant12
mrant12Author

Thanks for reading! And thanks for the clarification. I appreciate it :D

Dieznuts69420:Dieznuts, it is called webnovel if it is published in the web/internet. It is called Lightnovel if it is published outside the web and have a physical copy like a book. Anyway, I love reading your book so keep it up Auth👍🙂👍
Pro_Dave
Pro_DaveLv13

Yo dear author, I know that you must have some plan in mind but till ch 255 Elliot seems completely inept with runes. So I hope you have a plan for that coz him learning runes (which would be so slow that it would destroy this amazing pace of the novel) would not be viable. So hope you have some sort of a plan

mrant12
mrant12Author

Hi, yes, you will find out how he masters Runes very soon :D It's pretty cool in my opinion!

Pro_Dave:Yo dear author, I know that you must have some plan in mind but till ch 255 Elliot seems completely inept with runes. So I hope you have a plan for that coz him learning runes (which would be so slow that it would destroy this amazing pace of the novel) would not be viable. So hope you have some sort of a plan
naruto_shippuden_6468
naruto_shippuden_6468Lv5

harem?

mrant12
mrant12Author

Nope no harem :D

naruto_shippuden_6468:harem?
Nabomb
NabombLv15

Lol it’s really not gonna be harem? He already got a couple girls in love with him and a couple other with potential. Either someone gonna die or they gonna get heartbroken I guess? Be better just to go the harem route imo but guess we’ll see how you spin it. Great book though. Keep up the good work.

mrant12:Nope no harem :D
mrant12
mrant12Author

Thanks! :D Glad you're enjoying it. Hehehehe

Nabomb:Lol it’s really not gonna be harem? He already got a couple girls in love with him and a couple other with potential. Either someone gonna die or they gonna get heartbroken I guess? Be better just to go the harem route imo but guess we’ll see how you spin it. Great book though. Keep up the good work.
I_Bleed_For_You
I_Bleed_For_YouLv13

thanks god.

mrant12:Nope no harem :D
HaremsSuck
HaremsSuckLv4

Imagine trying to force the author to make their novel a harem there are so many

Nabomb:Lol it’s really not gonna be harem? He already got a couple girls in love with him and a couple other with potential. Either someone gonna die or they gonna get heartbroken I guess? Be better just to go the harem route imo but guess we’ll see how you spin it. Great book though. Keep up the good work.
Nabomb
NabombLv15

Cant see how you see this as trying to force the author, pretty much just an observation, but okay.

HaremsSuck:Imagine trying to force the author to make their novel a harem there are so many
Dakota_Butler_2076
Dakota_Butler_2076Lv13

Not gonna mention that you stole the picture from the video game smite?

Zero_Novel
Zero_NovelLv1

Doest MC also have strength power or he is more focus on speed?

mrant12
mrant12Author

Yes he has more than just speed...

Zero_Novel:Doest MC also have strength power or he is more focus on speed?
Zero_Novel
Zero_NovelLv1

Thanks for replying man

mrant12:Yes he has more than just speed...
mrant12
mrant12Author

Thanks for reading :)

Zero_Novel:Thanks for replying man
PurpleDao
PurpleDaoLv14

I am curious why your book isn't on the Win-Win Ranking list? How does that work or just didn't join it?

mrant12
mrant12Author

My updates doesn't meet the required number to join win-win :D

PurpleDao:I am curious why your book isn't on the Win-Win Ranking list? How does that work or just didn't join it?
PurpleDao
PurpleDaoLv14

Okay. Thank you for explaining

mrant12:My updates doesn't meet the required number to join win-win :D
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