Five-star cause why not This is the tradition And no segs here .

except for some unnecessary development overall a good story to read if things planned beforehand might've been one of the top Pokemon fanfic

this fanfic is simply amazing and the reasons for me to give it five star are: 1:- writing quality is very good and there are no grammer mistakes here and it's very rare on web novel to find a book with good grammer. 2:- the story itself is good, mc actually has a personality and is not controlled by hormones. the world building till now good and not very complicated. it's easy to understand because it's simple but, it has it's own charm. 3:- Mc has a good character building till now. he is evil, veil and will do anything to succeed. Mc doesn't solely rely on brute power and also uses his wits to achieve his goal. he isn't a skirt chaser and has a better goal to pursue . 4:- updates are very stable and author posts daily and sometimes throws bonus chapters as well. so if I could give it 6 stars for update stability I would give it but we only have 5 stars. 5:- world background till now is simple and realistic. the world on bigger scale isn't explored till now due to story being in it's initial stage. but what litte there is, it is perfectly explained . this is a basic summery of why i like this fanfic, but to understand it you will have to read it yourself and I really recommend you all to al least give it a try, you will definitely love it.

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I really love your story so far. When i stumbled upon this fic I was curious so I started reading . Your story is interesting in the way yiuve st it up with the power youve given him. What really needs to be fleshed out is his over all motivation. Does he want a family? Does he have a specific goal besides making a harem and enslaving the whole human race in the pokemon world? Is he going to have a harem or find one person? These are things that need to be adressed or can be adressed later to help grow your writing or just your characters in this fic. I love your story and will continue to enthusiastically read it but these are the things I would love to see to get a feel for your character And make them mor human and less like human drones he controls. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Definitely enjoyed reading this chapter not to that's quite strategic not to show his ace team to the public world as it'll cause problems not to mention be easy to recognize him which would do him bad if he is trying to do a mission or more so lay low look forward to reading more and finding out what will happen next especially on the way to Professor Oak's lab can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book would love to read more and find out what will happen especially in regards to OC plans in pallet town

wag sana drop Lodi 👍 .

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