The writing is quite well for a non-English speaker and is easy to read. The writing is really good if you’re able to fill in the words yourself. The biggest problem is the grammar issues, it’s difficult to understand if the author is explaining something or if someone is speaking half the time and you will need to re-read a few paragraphs. This does become less of a problem as the novel has progressed. The novel is written in first person which is both a different uniqueness but also sometimes confusing when the POV is changed between the early chapters. For these reasons alone are why I deducted any points. The updates seem to be quite consistent, and you can tell the author has gotten more comfortable as the series has progressed, a lot of the early chapters were quite short and were increased as the series has developed. It’s a very interesting story and unique characters will draw you in as long as you’re able to get past a lot of the earlier mistakes.
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