the story so far is very good, with excellent grammar and no spelling mistakes. The first few chapter are very rushed, and many things are not very well explained, or so I felt since I've never played honkai and no almost nothing about it, however I'm still enjoying it never the less.
spearsexual
Liked it!
LIKEhey author san is this your original work? since in first chapter or so i read a comment about this being on novel updates by other name? chronicle of aristocrat or something like that? is it same? or different?
spearsexual:Thanks for review. I’m not explaining honkai because I want to avoid info dumps. You can Google all information about honkai or ask in comments)