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*Sugestion* Download and use Grammarly, the story is good, but the lack of commas and grammatical errors in the text can make readers a little uncomfortable. Grammarly has both a paid and a free version, but even the free version helps a lot because it points out your mistakes and gives suggestions even as you write. After I downloaded it, I always use it when I go to write.
Retired life of Artoria Pendragon
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The biggest grammatical errors that I've see had, was the lack of commas too many times, and too long paragraphs. These are pretty simple mistakes.
Alanwalker4:Yup, using for ever chapter till now but still some mistakes pass through. Do point it out if you find one.
Alanwalker4AuthorAlanwalker4
Holo_Lover:The biggest grammatical errors that I've see had, was the lack of commas too many times, and too long paragraphs. These are pretty simple mistakes.