Review Detail of keulijeu in The Last Apostle: Journey Through Slaughter

It's 3.8 stars for me. So the story first goes on about 200 years ago and it is intriguing. The plot as well. Though I noticed that there are no punctuation marks in some phrases like commas, it is essential so one wouldn't be confused in reading. There were a few omissions though I suggest that the long paragraph should be split into bits, long paragraphs tend to make the narration a bit messy. And in terms of dialogue, you should make a space between the narration and the dialogue so that the dialogue won't get mixed up with the narrative phrases. Though all that's said, keep up the good work, author💯