So, for now after just two chapters, I can't say I recommend it. I would rate it, after reading just two chapters (I will read more and update this review), at 1/1,5 stars. I can barely read it. Unnecessary information is one thing, because there are bits that feel like a filler to make chapters longer. Another one is bunch of unverified information that are base of the story. Like with amount of chakra being something you can't increase because it's innate. Basically bunch of things you could verify with Google. But that I can forgive on account of this being a fanfic. You can do everything with fanfic. But edit this before posting. It's not mtl site. You start sentences with upper case letters. You make some sentences sound more like proper English, not as gibberish. Then you have something that I could at least consider giving it more than 10 chapters before dropping. Because now I see it like author took mtl-ed content and pasted it to webnovel without even looking at it, not to mention editing it.
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