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Fernizer
FernizerLv142yr
2021-12-27 07:46

So, for now after just two chapters, I can't say I recommend it. I would rate it, after reading just two chapters (I will read more and update this review), at 1/1,5 stars. I can barely read it. Unnecessary information is one thing, because there are bits that feel like a filler to make chapters longer. Another one is bunch of unverified information that are base of the story. Like with amount of chakra being something you can't increase because it's innate. Basically bunch of things you could verify with Google. But that I can forgive on account of this being a fanfic. You can do everything with fanfic. But edit this before posting. It's not mtl site. You start sentences with upper case letters. You make some sentences sound more like proper English, not as gibberish. Then you have something that I could at least consider giving it more than 10 chapters before dropping. Because now I see it like author took mtl-ed content and pasted it to webnovel without even looking at it, not to mention editing it.

Naruto:God level Reward System

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3.6
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Lustsifer
LustsiferLv13

The grammar is ugh, BAD! Probably because this is a translation(?). The idea is kinda the same with the usual sign-in system that was popular in China some weeks/months ago, so I don't think this will be good at the long run. I just can't continue reading this so I will place this story on my [Not Really Good for Your Brain!] reading list!

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THEdiveneONE11
THEdiveneONE11Lv11

so this is another system fic where mc is seemingly unaware pf his cercumstances where he gets the reward system and is awarded things like

3yr
Uzoma_
Uzoma_Lv4

Grammar is terrible and confusing, very annoying and frustratingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

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LostThe50_50
LostThe50_50Lv6

when you look for a naruto fanfic and finally see one, only to find out it was a xian-xia in disguise. BIG OOF This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count.

2yr
Carlos_Ribeiro_4380
Carlos_Ribeiro_4380Lv3

(Google translator) at first this fic was cool but then it got boring a perfect example of it, everything mc does becomes a reason for admiration, shock... (mc learns something before the other students (and they could research) reason for surprise, mc feeds from a healthy way something that makes everyone's jaw drop, mc breathes differently "wow this student is a genius, future Hashirama 😮😮😮" it was very boring bro not to mention some clichés that seem ridiculous, I'm even sad about it, the story had a future

2yr
Ri_On
Ri_OnLv12

I hope this thing doesn't disappointed me --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr
TimeBender
TimeBenderLv1

This is a reposted story. There are three exactly the same stories, one in russian, one in chinese (where I guess this translation is from) and the other under the name "billions of rewards". For the record, the last two have 882 chapters. Billions of rewards is a machine translated version, which acknowledges that it is only a translation. Its grammar is only slightly worse than this, so a human had to go over the version on webnovel, but they did a horrible job. 99% of text is the same, only the routine "replace words" tool is used. It is annoying to read, two sentences completely contradicting each other. Besides that, there are a lot of unexplained chinese references, like saying 666, poorly translated proverbs and all that. Would not recommend.

2yr
Knight087
Knight087Lv4

Terrible translation but good FANFIC...................................... ........................,.......................................

2yr
Vivan_Maurya
Vivan_MauryaLv4

I have tried reading this book three times now, but the grammar is killing me, the book is so fricking hard to read, i don't recommend trying to read this unless you want to lose brain cells, as a person who studied Chinese i know exactly why the words are so butchered ( they have a different grammar system and direct translating characters aka MTL won't work) its very painful, also the story till where i read felt very generic, the people felt very very out of character, like seriously have can you imagine Naruto saying "what's wrong with you, you have autism?" no way dude I just can't, the Naruto i know doesn't speak xianxia. I don't understand how this fanfic came so high in the rankings, but if you are a about to read this, let me tell you that you have been warned

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