Item: In MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power
Rating: 2.6
Author: StarWriting

StarWritingLv103yr

2021-12-29 09:39

Your MC is honestly just plain too edgy. All the killing and castrations, you honestly need to chill out my dude. Your story would be 10x better if your Mc just calmed down a bit.

In MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power

Daoist764038

3.6

16 Chs

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Daoist764038Author

But it's not like he is killing every villain he sees you know. He only killed those victims because they really didn't want to continue living even when he gave them a chance to recover.

3yr

ShadowScribeLv14

Op didn't mention the victims the MC killed. Only the killing and crippling of villains. Some would make sense as that is the hero that he is but it is described as being a daily thing that he is killing/castrating multiple people.

Daoist764038:But it's not like he is killing every villain he sees you know. He only killed those victims because they really didn't want to continue living even when he gave them a chance to recover.

2yr

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