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TheVeteranReader
TheVeteranReaderLv143yr
2021-12-29 22:13

This is an early review . This is also a warning to author. I like and dislike main character. I dislike his thinking about his ex, I like his character . It is realistic but author please don't make him fall for his ex again. This is a untold law: "Once a cheater, always a cheater." I am sure that you will ruin this story if you make him go back to that birch and I am stating that I will give this a one star and run away.

My Girlfriend Cheated on Me, so I Moved on With My Life

Slusher
4.1
14 Chs

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Spect3r
Spect3rLv4

I just gave up reading that. Have no hope for this novel to become anything better

3yr
8
Pachu72_Lee
Pachu72_LeeLv14

So true and the b**** explain herself why she did it in the first place 😟

3yr
5
Salty_God_Tuna
Salty_God_TunaLv5

Well that just means your a close minded person

3yr
4
TheVeteranReader
TheVeteranReaderLv14

Heh the cuck speaks. Do you like to raise another man's responsibility ?

Salty_God_Tuna:Well that just means your a close minded person
3yr
38
Salty_God_Tuna
Salty_God_TunaLv5

Well for me it's better to forget and move on than be like you who likes to cling to the past for some revenge to hurt them Do much stress for me better throw it to the back of my mind except for when things get personal then that means war

TheVeteranReader:Heh the cuck speaks. Do you like to raise another man's responsibility ?
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3yr
5
bondarant
bondarantLv2

aside from the fact that this is not a place to discuss relationships or give relationship advice in general I am pretty confident that once a person cheats there is a 95% that he/she will do it yet again when you say that not giving the person who cheated another try is close minded I can assure that the broken trust will not be mended back and no matter how hard it is tried nothing can change that

Salty_God_Tuna:Well for me it's better to forget and move on than be like you who likes to cling to the past for some revenge to hurt them Do much stress for me better throw it to the back of my mind except for when things get personal then that means war
3yr
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TheVeteranReader
TheVeteranReaderLv14

As I said Once A Cheater Always A Cheater

bondarant:aside from the fact that this is not a place to discuss relationships or give relationship advice in general I am pretty confident that once a person cheats there is a 95% that he/she will do it yet again when you say that not giving the person who cheated another try is close minded I can assure that the broken trust will not be mended back and no matter how hard it is tried nothing can change that
3yr
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Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

Bro do the mc go back to thay b**c*...!??

TheVeteranReader:As I said Once A Cheater Always A Cheater
3yr
5
TheVeteranReader
TheVeteranReaderLv14

No

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:Bro do the mc go back to thay b**c*...!??
3yr
2
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

So can ask you suggestion of reading this novel !?? 😅😅 sry some reviews don't actually give that positive feeling...

TheVeteranReader:No
3yr
3
TheVeteranReader
TheVeteranReaderLv14

It is safe read it

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:So can ask you suggestion of reading this novel !?? 😅😅 sry some reviews don't actually give that positive feeling...
3yr
3
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

Thanks for the info... 😎😎😁😁

TheVeteranReader:It is safe read it
3yr
5
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DinckleNinckle
DinckleNinckleLv2

I like this I like how he moves on instead of getting revenge I feel like I could do the same. juhgvbnbvcdxtrxyfxcyfkkcxfhcxfgctyghvjghvbvghcftyc

3yr

Vlacos
VlacosLv1

not revenge?, we are talking about betrayal, the figure of Judah is very strong, only someone extremely stupid would be okay with a traitor or try to make peace with a traitor. an enemy may be forgiven, but a traitor cannot.

3yr
Photosphere
PhotosphereLv14

The concept is indeed original from the ‘revenge’ topic that’s mostly written by people with screws loose in the head. But it is still not anything better, there is nothing ’I moved on’ in this story, he didn’t move on he began a cuck and ended a cuck. If a boy catch his girlfriend cheating (having SX) and does nothing, he’s a cuck, fair enough you’re not a violent person but still to do nothing at all… it suggests MC is someone with self-confidence issues, a background not introduced in the story, his sister’s death shouldn’t be the cause to that and his parents are clearly not bad either. The changes of scenery are abrupt and lack any homogenousity possible. The girlfriend’s motives aren’t said but just by the MC’s character it is easy to know why she cheated on him, in fact, if she didn’t break up with him was because of pity and if she came back was because of guilt, not love. Last hope of salvaging this story and giving it at least a decent ending was for him to tide up himself and tell Minami to go with him and confront the vixen, rather than go with a white shirt and pants maybe even sleepers clearly showcasing a person that’s going through depression and clearly hasn’t moved on, you can see right there why she cheated on him. Such encounter wouldn’t have only shattered the girl’s hopes (or pity) it would have given way to jealousy and it would have been the perfect revenge even if from his perspective, it’s something normal. Why is it wrong that you would ask your current girl to meet your ex to finalise everything? Not only would your girl trust you more as you’re giving this step with her but also he’d have his unintentional retribution. But no, he showed up like a loser (And this is actually a realistic scenario, but not one that happens that often) Anyway, interesting take but wrongly executed, finishing in 13 chaps is the best you could have done and although you said this is your own story, don’t expect my pity, I’m judging the story, not your life.

3yr
GodOfDeath1999
GodOfDeath1999Lv15

Reveal spoiler

3yr
xYunchex
xYunchexLv13

How stupid this novel can be?Author i don't know how u get the idea to write something like this but is very twisted and mc is better to kill himself.

3yr
Yaotian_Chen_5128
Yaotian_Chen_5128Lv3

This is an awesome story that shows both the ups and downs of a relationship and it shows that if you break something It will never be the same ever again. A must read for everyone.

3yr
KacbRe
KacbReLv10

A novel for men with cuck*ld and sick fetishes. All right, the MC and the author are a cuck man who prays for his girlfriend who cheated on him to live happily, it's really great and there are no words to say for the author

2yr
xYunchex
xYunchexLv13

I can't read 10 chapters!stupidity in the best format mmmmjjjjjjmmmjjmmjmjjjjjjjjjjj mmmmjjjjjjmmmjjmmjmjjjjjjjjjjj major mjjmmjmkjkjjj in kkkkkjmmjjj and mmmmjjjjjjmmmjjmmjmjjjjjjjjjjj kkkkkjmmjjj jkjjjjkkkk

3yr
Daoistv0lq9k
Daoistv0lq9kLv10

Надеюсь найдет другую девушку почему если любила изменила непонимаю(([img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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